LeAmberTail Reviews Starkit's Prophecy

Chpater oen prouloge

I have no words...)

 The cats gathered around the pool.They looked in it eagerly.A dark shape appeared on the surface.(Is it the author's disembodied head?)A blue she cat looked at it. (I WONDER WHO.)Her eyes were bright. (no one cares)

"There is a Prophecy!" She said.(I WONDER WHO IT'S ABOUT)"out of the darkness,a star will come to get rid of the evil tig(g)er and holy!"(SO VERY VAUGE)

"It's about Starkit!" (NO WAY) a white tom said."Shes going to save the forest"He looked at a gold tom by Bluestar."Should we tell Jayfeather?"(LET US PONDER WHETHER OR NOT WE SHOULD TELL A MEDICINE CAT A PROPHECY)He asked."Yes."said Bluestar."he needs to know" (I think this is going to be a LONG ride)

She walked away from the pool to tell Jayfeather about the Prophecy. (On the phone?)

Well,this is going to be a LONG,LONG,LONG,LONG ride.

-LeAmberTail