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Breeya Kirsten Winters

Name: Breeya Kirsten Winters
I LOVE the name!
Age: 14
Be careful with ages 13-16 because they are classed as Mary Sue traits
Gender: Female
Good
Sexuality: Asexual Biromantic
Never seen this before in an OC.  Originality
Appearance: Breeya is about average height, at 5"4. Since she is albino, she has white hair and pinkish-red eyes. She puts in blue contacts and actually dyed her shoulder-length hair a soft brown to fit in. She is actually a bit too thin for her age, which earns her the nickname Bone Sack at school by only about three people. Breeya has high cheekbones, and only a little underweight, but not too much to be unhealthy.
Good good all is good. I also like the fact that she changed her hair and eyes because like a Mary Sue would be like: LOOK AT MY BEAUTIFUL RED EYES! IM SO SPECIAL
Personality: Because she has social anxiety disorder, Breeya is very shy akd [and] self-conscious. She always overthinks everything, worrying about what people think of her. When you get to know her, though, she can come off as a bit rude, but that's only her sense of humor. If Breeya has a best friend, she'll constantly make snarky remarks as a joke. This actually sounds like me except for shy. Cuz bruh i ain't shy ;) Also being shy and having a social anxiety is over-used but if used correctly it can make a really good OC

Species: Human
Obviously
Occupation: Student
I'm just gonna say is it High School or Middle School at age 14 cuz I'm British and it's just Nursery, Primary then High School, College etc.
Backstory: The Winters were a normal family, except with an albino dad, which is why Breeya is also albino. She has three siblings, and nearly all of them have mental disorders because they run in her family. Breeya was diagnosed with social anxiety in first grade, and since her genderfluid sibling Aaron also had the disorder, the two instantly became best friends.
Very nicely put together. Also I like how she is albino for a reason other then just, she's albino cuz I wanted her to be. I also like the 'Mental health problems' running in the family, it makes sense.
Scars/Birthmarks: Breeya has a small scar on her hip from running in the playground with Aaron and scratching it.
No, poor Breeya.
Likes:
•Staying Home
•Reading
•Historical Fiction
•Duct Tape (she has a weird attraction to it)
•Aaron
I don't blame her. Duct Tape is amazing, it's the smell. And I just realised I might be a tad bit insane. Oh well.
Dislikes:
•People
•School
•Parties
•Jokes about suicide
I am the exact same, holy duck!
Other: When Breeya doesn't want to be in a situation, she tells her mom "shouldn't we pick Aaron up soon?" It's a secret code word meaning "I'm uncomfortable and I need to go" Oh right, that's original!
Health Issues: Breeya has Celiac
Damn. That's rough and original. One of my OCs has PKU which is fairly similar to this.

Grade: A+

Mary Sue: 2% For the age

Originality: 98%

Overall Thoughts: HOLY DUCK I LOVE THIS OC! She is has originality! She is very relatable [For me at least] and I just want to cuddle her! I FEEL SO BAD FOR HER! YOU MADE ME FEEL FEELINGS! THATS A HARD THING TO DO! I WOVE HEEER