MANAN FF: mistake or sin?

chap: 7

hi guys. Yea I know I am super sa bhi upper wala late but I am sooooo so sorry , I am hell bust in my life . but I know u all must be angry so everything I allowed shoes, stick everything. So here is the update.

Start.

Recap;

Nandini is doing all household work, and abhi and navya are finding nandu.

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Abhi with mukti and navya with cabir went to police station and there when they saw each other mukti and cabir was shocked and

C: mukti to yaha abhi ka sath.

Mu: tu mujha chor tu kia kar raha ha yaha.

C: voh ma ... yaha...voh

N: mukti yehi to ha voh jiss sa hum pyar karta ha, hamra bf.

C: (muttered) mar gaya...

C: lakin tu yaha kia kar rahi ha.

M: yar ma to bas... asa... hi ummm idher sa guzar rahi thi... to socha hoti chalo.. haan

C: ohhh acha yeh koi picnic point ha jo hoti chalo bol rahi ha or to abhi ka sath kia kar rahi ha.

Abhi: yar cabir ya meri girl friend ha.

C; oh acha gf ha . I see . muku care to explain.

Mu: and same to u cabir.

C: ok fine.

And they told each other about their relation and decided that they will tell to fab3 after some time .at that time only they got call from manik.

Conversation

M: hello guys its an conference call.

C: hi

Mu: hello

Aliya/ dhruv: hi

M: mana islia call kia ha to tell u that today evening u have to come here for dinner.

C: wow fine we will

Mu: but manik what about that girl kia kia tune us ka sath.

M: ghar ao khud pata chal jaye ga. Surprise ha tum logo ka lia,

A: ok fine

C: yea we will be their

Mu: by

Conversation ended;

Scene change:

Nandini is prepairing dinner for fab5 and is hell tired .

She has not eaten any thing rather than drinking water. And manik is only sitting and enjoying her condition.

M: nandu give me a glass of water.

N: ji

Nandu handed him a glass full of water. Manik drank a little and threw the rest on the floor.

M: oho ye to gir gaya chalo saf karo isa.

Nandini was looking at him with tears in her eyes. And started to go to kitchen.

M: kidher ja rahi ho.

N: kapra lana saf karna ha na

M: ni bohat time lag jaye ga. Apna saree ka palluu sa saf karo.

Nandini just nodded because her voice had become choked because she was controlling her tears.. and started to clean .and then went away. Manik was all the time smilling .

Precap:

Fab5 torturing nandini.

So guys I know its short, but bear it

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