User: @LunaTheMagicCat
Name: Mossshade- (This name doesn't flow very smoothly; I would suggest Spottedcloud, Mottledfur, or Leafspots)- 2 points
Gender: Tom/Male- (Good, you don't see many male OC's)
Clan: Treeclan- (TreeClan is pretty basic, you could go with something like OakClan, PineClan, CedarClan, or BirchClan)- 1 point
Rank: Med cat apprentice- (Awesome. I like male medicine cats.)
Appearance: Brown fur with some spots that look like a green but are just a different shad of brown- (Okay)
Personality: Kind, and quite- (These are good traits to have, but they're very basic and they aren't balanced. Maybe add that he has some insecurities/flaws? E.x. he's afraid of water, he's not the best hunter, or he doesn't believe in StarClan)- 3 points
Backstory: not much heppend when he was a kit, when he was an apprentice the clans had separated into 16 different groups, he was among the group who made themselves into a rouge clan named treeclan, he became the med cats apprentice- (This doesn't tell me much. I can imagine what happened, but it wouldn't be the same, especially if you plan to write a story about this cat)- 5 points
Mother: Unown- (Okay)
Father: Unown- (Something, anything?)
Points Taken: 11
Results: 89%
I'd like to imagine that this story is good, but you didn't give me much to work with. Surely your character has friends, siblings, or even aquaintances. Although I do admit that I asked that the backstory be medium length, it didn't have to be that small. Your cat also needs a balanced personality if he's going to have his own story, and I would suggest changing part of his name. Whatever you decide to do, don't give up. Warriors is a diverse fandom, and I'm sure that with a little help, there will be good results.
P.S. Sorry for the late rating; I haven't been on this account lately and I forgot about this book!
