-When They Write The Whole Thing Like This
How do you even have to time to capitalize every letter.
Or when they write the ENTIRE book exactly like this.
"Aqua marine blowfish caked her face in make up then took a swim and her makeup was still perfect because she amazing. Then this cutie named Percy walked over and was like,s up baby and then they went out and he left Annabeth and they ran away together ti be together. Despite the fact their basically brother and sister. I guess she's jus ttaht beautiful. Her orbs were the color of the ocean but they had amazing swirling gold flecks too. Then Percy and I went on a quest and we like almost died then we were blessed by the gods, all of them to be exact. And we're immortal and are very in love,"
----NOOOOO JUST STOP.
1. Don't write it in such a big chunk I've run into so many stories like this, and I leave it right away cuz I cnat stand it.
2. Blessed by all the gods. Like wtf. No. Just. No.
3. Who the fuck where's make up on while swimming like u dumb.
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Worst moments in PJO fanfics
RandomRant of everything wrong in PJO fan fics. From cringey plot lines to just the smallest things that make me wanna burn my eyes out. Read if you think any PJO fanfic is cringey and are looking for someone to agree with.
