My Poems

Poem 2

The violent pitter patter of heavy rain drummed against the pavement outside
Dark gray clouds loom over this town.
The street started to flood.
Filling with water.
The pouring rain covers my view of the street.
A light hum fills the air.
The view of the dark gray sky turns a bright white as lightning cracks.
The thunder roared.
Bang Bang Banging against the wall. Vibrating the floor.
The clash of blues and purples through the sky.
Wait, blue?
Purple?
The world spins around me.
Flashing lights on the ceiling.
The jumping figures in the dark.
The figures in the dark,
Turn to reveal their true selves.
My friends faces glowed.
Bouncing to the beat of the drums.
The waves of sound pound pound poun...
    

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Here's another original poem. Pls comment any changes u see should be done. Also comment some ideas for what to write.

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