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NEBULOUS @blissfulchamomile
TITLE: 7/10! it doesn't seem to relate to the story and while it's unique, it's pointless!
COVER: 7/10! it's pretty, but it's plain and doesn't draw people's eyes!
SUMMARY: 6/10! it provides enough insight to guess at where the story is going, but it doesn't really intrigue me!
FACE CLAIMS: 8/10! tori kelly is a unique choice! i don't think i've seen her used before. i also like your recasting of betty and jughead, although froy as archie wouldn't be my first choice!
STORY LINE: 7/10! the friends with benefits thing is a little cliche; however, sandra's backstory is very interesting! your writing style is very dialogue heavy with not much action, and your characters seem very cookie cutter! the story was rushed and hard to get into, especially with the lack of character development. personally, first person isn't my favorite thing to read or write, and most people aren't fans of it either!
