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TITLE: 7/10! to be fair, we're only three chapters in, but so far it has no tie in to the story! it is pretty though!
COVER: 9/10! it matches the rest of your covers and it's a great picture of lana!
SUMMARY: 8/10! it shows enough information to get people hooked, which is good! it's also a nice length!
FACE CLAIMS: 7/10! i see lana used a lot in face claim books, but not usually in stories! carlson young is a little overused in my opinion, but since she's a side character i'm fine with it! i also appreciate you recasting betty and jughead!
STORY LINE: 8/10! from the summary it seems like it's going to be very interesting! it's very unique to give jackie a girlfriend when she's going to end up with cheryl! nitpicky writing style details: your style in this is a little choppy, with not much background and mostly dialogue! other than that, i love it!
