The Heart Conqueror Awards 2018- 19 {CLOSED🚫}

❌EVA❌

Eliminated

1. Kitni Mohabbat hai ElysianCoral

2. Tu Mera Humsafar Season 1 AngelGoldieReal

3. Rehnuma: The One Who Stands By You Priyanka011 and team.

4. It's Your Own Story Praahi

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REVIEWS.

1) Kitni Mohhabat Hai:- ElysianCoral

The story line is beautiful and I personally like reading such emotional stories. But I think that some changes are necessary- like one example: the part in which Manik was introduced, the song he sang, and the videocall every thing was mixed up. A reader may get difficulty while reading in analyzing that these are the lyrics of song and these are the dialogues.Hope you are understanding. And one more reason for the elimination is somewhere the emotions were lacking. But leaving all this aside the story is really very beautiful and personally I loved the cover pic. It was awesome. And once changes are made, I believe that the story will be more beautiful... Hope I didn't hurt you in anyway.

2) Tu Mera Humsafar:- AngelGoldieReal

This story is really beautiful and is counted among the best stories of swasan fandom. But according to the judging criteria I was asked to cut marks for the use of short forms and there were many as compared to your own other stories. And there were many spelling mistakes, which may make readers lose interest in reading your story. Other than that I don't have any other specific reason for elimination. It's just when I compared all the stories I got for judging, the main plot of those (qualified) stories were something on which people doesn't usually write which was way more unique and amazing. And I think they deserve a chance to be in the competition. I am sorry if I hurted you. And also, I loved the cover it's too beautiful.

3) Rehnuma - the one who stands by you:- Priyanka011

Amazing title, beautiful cover and story line as well. But there were many grammatical errors specially in the first two parts and some in last too that can make reader lose interest.
Other than that, it's a beautiful story I so loved it. But while comparing it with others they were somewhat more powerful and interesting. Sorry if I hurted you all.
And yes one thing I want to say is please keep all the parts in each of your accounts. Because it can be difficult for people to search for all it was good that I found all parts in Crazy_Sidhantian profile but the person who nominated the book didn't had all parts in her profile so this is my personal opinion otherwise it's your choice.
All the best👍.

4) It's your own story:- Praahi

Beautiful story aw well as the title which directly tells about the story.
Nive attempt in making cover but I think that it could be changed.
Other than that it's a lovely story. And I really wanted to send it for second round, but what to do I had to eliminate the book because the concept of others stories was more powerful than yours. Sorry if I hurted you.

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Hope you guys take my reviews in a positive way not negative.

Any queries or help needed from your judge: EVA, free to do an inline comment 👉👉

Motto- Dream Big

With Love
~Eva❤