The Heart Conqueror Awards 2018- 19 {CLOSED🚫}

Qualifiers (Eva)

1) Ignorant Crossroads Sparkler8

Cover: I really loved the cover it was too beautiful and attractive.

Title: No doubt unique and very creative title. One which speaks so much about the story. And it also attracts others to read it...
Story and blurb: The way your wrote the story and specially the way you gave equal importance to all the four characters in each part, I really loved it.
Plot: The plot is different and it's a unique idea.. I liked the way you write. I also liked the plot.
Grammar: Grammar was also correct.
So overall it was a lovely story to read.. Very well done keep it up... ❤

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2) Fanaa: Destroyed in Love lucky03m

Cover: The cover no doubt very beautiful and attractive.
Title: "Fanaa" those who all know Hindi knows how much this words speaks so according to me it was the best and most approach title to use.
Story and blurb: The story description was written very well. The reference to "moth and flame" I really liked it. The story was written very well. The characters ,their emotions was portrayed very well.
Plot: The plot is of separation. It is very well written and the emotions too are very well expressed.
Grammar: Grammar was alright just a little spelling mistakes while writing Hindi sentences.
Just a little advice while writing sentence in Hindi just read it once again because sometime it happens that we want to wait something and end up writing something else.
Overall lovely story. I enjoyed reading it. For readers who love stories with emotions this one is worth a try... All the best... Keep Writing... ❤

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3) Second chance rabia0032

Cover: Earlier the story didn't had cover but now it have so it's good as covers do play a great role. But I think that cover can be improved more.
Title: The title "second chance" which directly speaks about the story that it's related to second chance. It's very appropriate for the story.
Story line and blurb: The story is written very beautifully and is focused on two people Swara and Sanskar. Emotions are expressed very well. Though I think the story description (one which appears below cover) can be reached written.
Plot: The plot of giving second chance. It's unique as not many people write on it. The story is simple yet unique and lovely.
Grammer: Grammar is alright.
So, it was a very beautiful story... Well done.. Keep writing ❤...

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4) The Rake ManikxNandini

Cover: Cover is beautiful but it can be made more attractive.
Title: Title is unique and attractive.
Storyline and blurb: Story is written simply yet beautiful. I liked the way you wrote. Characters were expressed well.
Plot: plot is of college love story but it was made more beautiful by the scenes you have written.
Grammer: Grammar is good.
So, it was a beautiful college love story. I enjoyed reading it. It was simple yet very interesting... Well done... Keep writing... ❤

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5) Revenge of Love TreasuresOfHeart

Cover: Cover is beautiful.
Title: The title directly speaks that it is a revenge story. So it's definitely a appropriate title for the story.
Storyline and blurb: The way you write the story is very nice. Characters were expressed very well. And it was really very interesting reading the story.
Plot: The plot is of revenge. The way of nandini's revenge is very interesting to read. The revenge idea is common but you made it unique by the way you wrote it.
Grammer: Grammar was good.
So, beautiful story and very interesting. The idea of Nadini's revenge is very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing Well Done... ❤
Just one thing I want to tell you that if you change your username during contest then please do inform the contest makers because it makes difficult for us to search you. Please ignore it if you had already informed.

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6) Agenda of Love Moonlight_Devils

Cover: Beautiful and very appropriate cover. One which directly speaks of the story.
Title: Title is very unique, interesting and attractive. It's the most appropriate title for the story. Well done.
Storyline and blurb: The story is focused in Swara and Sanskar, who are on a agenda. Both in navy and are on a mission. The story is written very beautifully and it has mystery too. The characters are mysterious and I like the way you expressed their emotions. I really loved reading it.
Plot: The plot of the story focuses on two navy officers, who are on a agenda. The plot is very unique and mysterious. And very well written.
Grammer: Grammar was good. And I liked your vocabulary. It was very nice reading the story.
So, beautiful mysterious story... I enjoyed a lot reading it... You guys did great job.. Keep it up.. Well done... ❤

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7) Destiny- it's all about life AngelGoldieReal

Cover: Beautiful and attractive cover.
Title: The Title is  appropriate as it directly tells about the story yet don't disclose much.
Storyline and blurb: Story is about Swara and Sanskar where Swara marries Sanskar who is already married and had a son. The story is written very well and characters their emotions are expressed very well.
Plot: The plot of second marriage...It's beautifully written. And its made unique and interesting by showing Swara's relation with Ansh. Sanskar loving Swara and then Return Of Ragini who is now obsessed. It was very interesting story. I honestly liked the idea. And also I really enjoyed reading it.
Grammer: Grammar is poor. There were some spelling mistakes. In story description also there were some mistakes. And use of short forms can also be avoided.
Overall it was interesting and beautiful story... The idea was very nice... Well done Keep Writing...❤

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8) Chrasing into the billionaire InsaneStutiScribbles 

Cover: Cover is nice but it can be made more attractive.
Title: Title is also good and attractive. It speaks about the story too. So it's a appropriate title.
Storyline and blurb: The story is written very well. The idea is different from other billionaire kind stories. The fact that Manik who is the billionaire but lives a simple life, doesn't act like a billionaire, is very nice. Though I think that story description can be rewritten. I liked the way you give heading to all the chapters.
Plot: The plot of the story of a billionaire love story. Where the boy is a billionaire but is a down to earth person and this fact itself makes it unique and different from many other billionaire types stories.
Grammer: No problem with grammer. it was good.
So it is a sweet interesting story. Beautifully written. Keep writing. Well done. ❤

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