For those who've finished reading this book, I'd like to make a request. For me to keep producing better chapters with stronger content, I need opinions. I'll ask a handful of questions to determine my strengths and weaknesses.
And please, it'll help me more if you actually explain your answer as well
1) On a scale of 1-10 how would you rate the quality of the characters? Were they alive enough, realistic and relatable?
2) On a scale of 1-10 how would you rate the story itself? Was the plot entertaining, constantly grabbing your attention?
3) On a scale of 1-10 how would you rate the game Ember Wind? Is the game's apparent functionality actually playable, are the classes varied enough to allow player freedom?
4) On a scale of 1-10 how did I do writing this book? Do I need to slow it down more or speed it up? Was it rushed or feeling needlessly drawn out?
5) Do you have any suggestions for me to add to the next book? Any interesting twists or ideas?
6) On a scale of 1-10 how was the combat? Did it feel real, was it too fast or too slow?
7) On a scale of 1-10 how was the setting? Could you imagine the world around you?
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Ember Wind: Corrupted
Science FictionBook 2 in the Ember Wind Series [#74 in Sci-fi 2/11/19] January 2043... Six months have passed since seven million people became trapped in the now infamous Virtual Reality game, Ember Wind. In that time, very little progress has been made to free t...
