Author Banana_Party
SPOILER ALERT! THIS IS MY OPINION AND IM NOT TRYING TO HARM THIS PERSON!
Cover: Boring, you could of at least put some words on there.
Characters in general: They all seem like they're reading off a script. Like you know that scene from the second despicable me, where the girl is reading something for Mother's Day. It feels like that. I find it kinda funny how they keep on saying "Do you want to bond" and "okay." Like I swear to god they say "Bond" and "Okay" more they say anything else
Format: It's weird like it's gonna be for a script for a crappy middle school play.
Plot: It's weird because John gets shot and you think he'd be nice to Julian, but he isn't. Also after he got shot everyone acted like it never happened. There's two bullies and they're just mean to him for no reason. They're just like "your father hates you Let's beat you up." Why are they such jerks.
Final thoughts: I found this to be kinda hilarious. It enters the so bad it's good territory. I actually read this fanfic with my good friend and sometimes I go "Let's Bond" and she would say in a high pitched voice "Okay!" I think it's great in a comedy way, but terrible if you were going for a serious fanfic.
I give it: ⭐️⭐️⭐️ three stars out of 5
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