The Judge's Daughter

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⚠️Spoilers ahead! This is not me trying to make fun of or hurt the writer!⚠️

Author: sammispector

Cover: It's just a photo. I don't think it's great or terrible.

Formatting: The paragraphs could be spaced out. It's a bit hard to read.

Characters: I think all the characters are alright and I don't really have much to say but I felt like a lot of the characters lacked depth. The Dad didn't seem to have a lot of depth to him, like he was just evil and cruel for the sake of being evil and cruel.

Plot: It feels pretty bland and cliché for the most part. I don't think it's very memorable. It's just a falling for a bad boy story but with a band element. There was a few parts that confused me. On of them was when they first had sex she was sober but she couldn't remember any of it, did she hit her head on the bed? Another one was when they had the first pregnancy scare why didn't they learn from their mistakes and get some fucking condoms‽

Rating: Giving it ⭐️ ⭐️ two stars out of 5

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 09, 2019 ⏰

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