Okay so I realized in the story that their currently 14 characters trapped in the school and my dialogues basically are the same people each time with the top 3 most speakers being: Jimin, Jae and Hobi.... Which Yk is not ideal especially since it's a Jikook story lol
Also I kinda feel bad having so many characters around and only 4-5 of them are speaking while the others just basically stand there which we all know isn't realistic especially in a situation like. People would be talking like crazy...
So my question is... Would you guys be okay with longer dialogues?
Longer dialogues would result in more people speaking out and having interactions in the story more than being background characters. Also gives me practice on my writing 😊
So answer the question and I'll get right to it. Update will come as soon as possible.
Thank you for your time and I'll talk to y'all next time💛
~Jae💙
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•Last Halloween || Jikook•
FanfictionJimin is trapped in his school, with his friends, his ex, his teachers and a bitch he wishes would step out onto a race track. Not to mention the mysterious, revenge seeking killer who lurks behind them just waiting to cut them to pieces. Will they...