Debra doesn't need anyone to tell her that going from one relationship straight into another is never a good idea. Despite knowing this, she finds herself staring at a certain Marine with the body of a demigod and all covered in tattoos.
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Hey you! You've made it to the end of His Purple Heart. Thank you so much 🙏🏽 for reading, voting and commenting.
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As most of you probably know by now, I mostly write for fun, but I do plan on taking my writing to the next level in the coming years. Therefore your feedback is very important to me.
Tell me truthfully and respectfully, what did you like and what areas do you think need improvement? Below I've formulated some questions to help you along with your feedback.
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1. What do you think of the general description of characters, settings etc?
2. Which character do you think was under developed and why?
3. I'm not big on giving secondary characters a story line. Did you miss that in this book?
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4. Your opinion on the sex scenes. Too soft/too steamy? Too descriptive/more description needed? Is the overall balance too much or too little? Did the scenes help advance the plot in anyway?
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5. What did you like about the opening chapter that made you continue reading and eventually turn the page to chapter two? Was the first chapter a little too cliche?
6. What does it take for you to vote on a chapter? (Keep in mind that every chapter takes 3-5 hours to write, edit and proofread. This process is even longer when the occasional writer's block kicks in.)
7. Did you at any point skip any chapters or skim read certain chapters? Why?
Thank you for your feedback. I will review and consider all of them. Here's to writing better books in the future. 🥂
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In the meantime, in case you're looking for romance books to read, I have two other completed books on my profile that you can read if you want to. They are part of a series called The Stranger's Series, and are rated mature (18+). Pick your poison and start reading. The stories are standalone.
Book 1: The Stranger's Wife
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Book 2: The Stranger's Baby
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Find them on my profile @LadyAltagracia
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