Naruto: when the night falls (WILL BE REWRITTEN)

Chapter one

Naruto was hiding from the villagers and ran towards the forest of death he was exhausted from running he stopped and sat under a tree little did he know he accidentaly slept

*MINDSCAPE*
Naruto opened his eyes and saw he was in a sewer and thought 'they even threw me down a sewer' naruto heard a voice. the voice said "The villagers are doing it worst and worst for our host" he wasn't sure who it was so he followed the voice his eyes widened.

He saw madara,tobirama and hashirama and finally saw the ten tails he was scared that tentails naruto said "where am i, am i dead?" naruto asked.tentails said "no child you are not dead.we are in your mind"naruto look confused then madara said "we are sealed in you by the sage of six paths. And he said you will have a bad life so he said 'you need to protect this child as for he is neglected by his parent's for  his twin 'brother' and 'sister' because of the prophecy" naruto was amaze and happy he will be trained by the most powerful shinobis ever existed and the tentails said "i can train you to control all tentails but i will first give you three-tails limit" naruto have stars in his eyes. Everyone thought 'a very excited child. Huh'  tobirama said "you are waking up whe you need us summon us" he smiled at naruto.naruto said "okay. And thank you for being my first friend" he smiled

*REAL WORLD*
#NARUTO'S POV#
I woke up and saw my wounds all healed i said "summoning jutsu" smoke puff out and i saw the three of them and i said "can we start training" with puppy eyes. they said "okay,okay we will train you but first we need you to have some of our blood in you for you to master some of our jutsu" i look so excited i will have a blood from an uchiha and a senju in me (no homo) i said "okay what do we need to do" with an questioning tone. Madara said "do you know the blood ritual from the uchiha clan?" and i said "yes,a little only though"mand madara said "it's okay at least you know the ritual" he looked at hashirama and said "hashirama we need a blood ritual for little naru" hashirama walked closer to madara and naruto and said "okay but why not with tobirama too?" he asked madara. madara said "because you are the clan head and when there is more senju blood than uchiha blood in one body he/she will be a half uchiha than elite uchiha if both uchiha and senju blood are same exact amount he/she will have the access to rinnegan,sharingan and wood release as well all affinity" both senju and naruto was amaze from what have they heard from madara but the two (hasirama and madara) and naruto started the blood ritual.

*moment's later*
We finished the blood ritual as i felt pain i screamed but not loud enough to let the village hear it madara said "i forgot about the outcome" hashirama was scared and said "why did you forget about it" and madara remembered something and said "naruto is in a process of obtaining the rinnegan and sharigan" " *sigh* ohh thank kami for that is only it he is feeling" while releaving from the scary thought's. I stop screaming madara gave me a piece of paper and said "it's a chakra paper. Try putting chakra on it" i did what he told me it sliced into many piece (ok everyone i will not put naruto training or i should comment down bellow ok)(ps. I will just say naruto has all chakra natures and all kekkai genkai. i think)

#??? P.O.V#
*7YEARS LATER*
Naruto was twelve now and ready for graduation to become genin naruto thought 'yes i finally will take of this mask of a weakling' he smiled. Then iruka-sensei came into the room and said "goodmorning class" all student stand up and said "goodmorning iruka-sensei" they all sat back down iruka the said "tomorrow is your graduation to become genins if you fail come back next year" every one was excited especially naruto 'cause he was ready to see thier faces in shock that the deadlast will graduate but the he taught something was strange about mizuki

*TIME SKIP*
Naruto called iruka-sensei and said "iruka-sensei i think mizuki is planning something" iruka said "mizuki is a friend of mine why would he do something" naruto then said "if you don't believe me i will just go with what he is planning on" implying that he might stole something that konoha treasure like the scroll of sealing (idk) then iruka said "okay if his planning something just go with it" naruto said "okay iruka-sensei" he left to go home.

*NAMIKAZE COMPOUND*
Naruto said "i'm home" and he heard "oh your back usless" naruto just got to his room (at the attic) he smiled and looked at his money he saved by being an ANBU it was more than enough to buy his own apartment to get away from his so called 'family'

*THE NEXT DAY*
Naruto brought his money to buy an apartment even though he wasn't a ninja yet to buy an apartment

*TIME SKIP* (sorry for this many time skip)
Naruto was waiting in the forest of death with the scroll of sealing until naruto saw iruka-sensei and said "mizuki-sensei told me to bring him the scroll of sealing to pass and become a genin" then mizuki said "naruto give me the scroll and don't listen to iruka his a traitor" then naruto said "ohhh! Iruka-sensei is now the traitor well just gonna give this to iruka-sensei" naruto gave iruka the scroll of sealing and said "iruka-sensei give it to the hokage-sama and come back to me and i need help in something" iruka just nodded and shushined to the hokage's office

*BACK WITH NARUTO*
Mizuki said "what are going to do to me you're not even that strong" he laugh and he heard naruto said "summoning jutsu" naruto said "yeah im not strong enough but this guy's are" the smoke disappeared and shows hashirama,tobirama and madara. Mizuki's eye's widden......
TBC.......
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