A Power Inside (Naruto Fanfiction)

Yellow-chan rereads A Power Inside!

Hello everyone!

Hello.... Yes, hello..

As what you saw in the title, today, I will be rereading my book which is this one!! It's been years since I completed this book and I wanted to go down the memory lane. I will also reread A Goddess, Their Guardian after this so you better stay tune!

I will be writing down the title of the chapter and my comments about it. Without further ado, I'll start rereading!

Man, this will be a long ass book to read...

1: Graduation Day!!! Hoorayy!!

Okay, first of all, about that sun freaking light. The reason why I wrote that is because of my experience too. I usually woke up with the sun slapping my face like my curtains can't do anything at all!!

Honestly speaking, I decided Ayumi to be the Hokage's adopted child because I've read a lot of books wherein the protagonist is a traveler or a sibling of Kakashi or smthng like that.

And about that Frozen thing. I literally cringe lol. Forgive my 12 year old self. I was addicted to frozen that I could relate it in my story welp..

Lastly, the chapter is short and has plenty of skips like wtf am i doing wit my life.

2: 2 words gives special meaning...

What the heck is that flashback tho???? Liek who the fuk talks when there is a cut on her throat?? Ya girl Riku have special powers to talk when her throat is cut liek shit. You know what, let's just accept that I am still 12 at that time writing a story that I don't know if that throat thing is possible. And another short chapter for me yay! Next!

3: Team 7??? SAY WHAT!!??

I love how my protagonist always gets to be late (Like in my new book A Goddess, Their Assassin better check it out *wink wonk*) it's always my forte to be late except for school though. Whenever we have meet ups with friends, I would usually go the last?? Like, the call time would be at 8 AM for example and I would leave the house by 8. 

Honestly, around this chapter, I am already having a battle with my mind whether to ship Ayumi with Naruto or Sasuke. They're my pick during these times. I haven't thought of adding moments with her of the rest of the boys.

There's this paragraph that I have to rewrite because it was so fucking lame. It's the introducing Sasuke part yeah that one. I can't remember what was the first written but I know it's ugly as hell.

I like the name of the dots too! 

And there's an ad great. 

4: Memories Fear Happiness

Right of the bat, why there's no comma in my title? Well, I don't know either.

And dang, Sasuke looks cool in that pic.

Lol I remember this chapter where I literally copy and paste the whole lyrics of the song. I have to shortened it out though because it's super lame and inconvenient.

(Uhm at this moment, I just saw a rat running up the wire of the pc and I just stare at it lmao)

I wanted Ayumi to be connected with Obito and the rest so I wrote as her cousin. It made the readers confuse but I explain it on the further chapter. And! It's the power of fanfiction! You can change some parts!

I'm getting lazy reading. I don't like long paragraphs it's making me feel dizzy.

lol I love how I made Sasuke look stupid at my story. I like it I like it.

5: The Bell Test..

Ugh, I hate the fact that there's a missing dot on the title! I wanted three periods! Not 2!