Book Review: aarmiy
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Cover
I really like the aesthetic you're going for! But I think the title could be a little more bold so that your readers don't have a hard time looking for it.
Rating: 7/10
Description
I really like the suspense the description gives, it draws me in very easily. But the overall description could be a little more organized!
Rating: 8.5/10
Characters
Probably my favorite part of the book! I love the main character's personality and her sense of individualism (she isn't like a typical character from a high school fanfic). Jungkook's curiosity and shyness in the book matches him really well, it helps me imagine your story in my head a lot better.
Rating: 10/10
Plot
I could see where this story is going but it could venture more into its main theme (I'm not sure if that makes sense). It is slower than most stories go, but there's nothing wrong with that. Other than that, I'm excited to read the rest!
Rating: 7/10
Grammar
There are small errors here and there but nothing major! Some people just don't take the time to look over their writing but you seem to do it very nicely.
Rating: 9/10
Overall
I think this book has so much potential! I only say this because I haven't finished yet, but it keeps me on my toes ahaha. I can't wait to find out what happens between the main characters once they become associated a lot more.
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