[Rewritten version]It was a lonely Tuesday morning in the lands of the great tyrant Al IV of the B.Y kingdom.At street number 8 ,where at the time it was cold and cloudy, lived a young boy who was named Jim.The one destined to live a tragic life.
"In this world everyone has a power.Well at least 96% of them do.Of that 96% only 2% have multiple powers.The hero ,Alice, being one of them.In the history books there was never a person that has had more than 2 powers and even when they had 2 powers the could not activate it simultaneously.One day a demon lord was born.One that had 4 different powers and could activate them simultaneously.This demon [in this story a demon which is a human that is no longer considered a human and that of a being brought from hell-appearance also changes] wiped out half the human race as an example after someone decided to defy them.It is rumoured that before this happed this boy was innocent and protected from this corrupted country.After loosing his family he was taken in by the best assassin, Max, and trained to be his heir.This boy's name was known as 'Jim' before he became a demon and changed his name to 'Hate'." The elder gave out its' speech.
He stood there; paralysed with fear.His pupils shrunk with his eyes widening at the sight before him.The boy didn't want to believe what he had just seen before him.This new emotion that he experienced was stronger than any other that he had come to contact with in his short life: rage,sadness and anger all combined into one to make a painting that could be considered true art.At that moment the world that he knew shattered.Even though he knew he lived in a corrupted kingdom he never knew that something like this would ever happen to him.
The one that made Jim hopeless was the great hero Alice who promised to bring peace to the kingdom.She was supposed to make everyone happy yet she only had the ability to bring sadness.Truly an example of when a coin falls onto the wrong side and you lose a bet.
This fake had just committed an act that will be her demise.The hero has just killed Jim's grandmother. 'You will regret this' was one of his thoughts.
The kid had gone to pick some apples for his beloved grandmother.She was his only family.She had been reduced to a red splatter onto the gravel that Al owned and this made it normal.Everything that Al owned was stained with a scent of iron an an unbearable odour of rotting flesh.
'Innocent until proven guilty...Liar!' The boy thought.This was truly a saddening sight that only a tear is paid from bystanders to watch.They truly couldn't care less unless it happened to them.
The blind grandmother was there with nothing left, not even a breath.Lifeless she was laying down on the ground due to being accused of stealing.The frail lady couldn't even resist her cruel fate.
The boy fell onto his hands and knees for only a second then he got up and ran like if he didn't the world would end saying, "please somebody save me," only to bump onto a man with smooth curly dark blue hair with light blue eyes that resembled a summer sky.
"Oww" the boy cried in physical pain since all the storage for mental pain was full. "Hello, I'm Max, my powers are mind reading and death sentence and I know what has just happened to you and what will happen to you in the future.Option one, if you don't come with me you die because your a threat.Option two, you come with me and we train you."
Jim was very confused.This was the first time he had met someone who claimed they had multiple powers and he was wondering whether or not This Max person is only bark and no bite or whether he would carry out his threat.
"I'm going to make you my heir since with what has just happed gives you the mind set for it and it seems like you have the potential.Oh by the way my friend there in the trees he also has two powers one is being able to mask his presence and the other is to see what powers a person has.I read his mind and it looks like you have 4 powers and I find this interesting so that's why I'm making you my heir".

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An assassin's Hate
FantasyThe death of Jim's grandmother drives him crazy.He ends up being trained to be the heir of the strongest assassin group and turns into a demon and rises up to be their leader: The demon lord Hate. ---------------------------- Aim: to write about 500...