The Freak-Nik

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Ciauna POV

"Okay so before we walk in, Make sure if y'all see Leel to let me know," I told them grabbing my phone out of the cup holder.

"Okay," They shook their heads nodding.

We got out of the Jeep walking to the gate.

When we made it to the gate it was hella people.

We broke the line walking to the front.

I ducked my head not trying to get noticed by the guards.

We showed them our VIP pass which instantly led to them letting us in.

As soon as we walked in, A funky scent smacked me right in the face.

It smelled like cigarettes and ass.

I scrunched up my nose in disgust. It's so fucking stanky in here.

I took a moment to take everything in. The club was very well built, I see why Leel was always bragging on it.

It was huge.

Dudes where on the dance floor in there hoochie daddy shorts acting a plum fool.

And don't get me started on the females.

Some had their ass and tities out. This shit was outrageous.

"Let's go to our section," I hollered over the music to Bre them.

As we took off walking through the crowd, I suddenly got this feeling that I was being watched.

Every step I took the more paranoid I grew.

I stopped for a second looking around.

Why am I getting this feeling?

I took a deep breath, Before catching back up with Lazelle them.

When we arrived at our section. I took another Deep breath before sitting down.

"What do y'all wanna drink," Lazelle asked?

"We can get some D'Usse and some Hennessy," Bre stated.

"Yeah, and get some Margaritas too," La La pitched in.

"Excuse me," I said to the bottle girl walking by.

"Yes, what can I get for you ma'am," she asked nicely.

"Can We get a bottle of D'Usse and Hennessy with 8 margaritas in our section," I questioned?

"Yes of course. Would that be all," she asked?

"Yeah, they'll be all," I smiled

"I'll be right back," she informed me before walking off.

"I'm so ready to get drunk," La La laughed.

"I swear," Bre laughed.

I got the feeling that I was being watched again. I took a deep breath trying to control my anxiety.

I shook my head before hearing one of my favorite songs come on by Baby Smoove.

"Omgggggg," I streaked

"Cause hold on I don't think y'all heard him," I hollered standing up.

"Here she go y'all," Lazelle laughed.

He said, "I don't really give a fuck about who with me & who ain't. I put my feelings down, ain't no feelings in the bank."

I sat back down looking up to see the bottle girl walking back up.

She sat the bottles on the table.

"Thank you," Bre said.

She nodded walking away.

"Pass me one of those margaritas," I said looking at La La.

35 minutes later

"I have to go to the bathroom," I slurred standing up.

"Do you want me to go with you," Bre asked?

"No, I'm ok, I can go by myself," I responded.

"I'm going with you anyway," she said Standing.

We walked out of the VIP section. Traveling through the crowd.

"Do you know where the bathroom is," I asked Bre.

"No, this is my first coming here," she responded

I shook my head, halting in my steps.

"If you don't know where the bathroom is, then where the fuck are we going," I laughed.

"I thought you knew, I mean this is your brothers club," she said laughing making sense.

"Girl Ian never been here before," I said shaking my head.

She shook her head pulling out her phone.

"Hold on let me ask one of these bottle girls," I said.

"Excuse me," I tapped her.

"Yes," she responded?

"Can you please show me where the restroom is," I asked trying to hold in my urine.

"Yes, follow me," she said.

Me and Bre followed her squirming through the crowd.

"The bathroom is right there on the left," she said pointing.

"Thank you," I said before walking off.

We walked into the bathroom seeing 2 other girls.

I rushed pass them walking into a stall doing what I need to do.

5 minutes later

"We can go now," I said throwing my paper towel in the trash.

We exited the bathroom walking through the crowd again.

People was acting like they couldn't move out of the way.

I'll be lying if I said I wasn't tired of doing this shit. It wasn't like we was being rude and not saying excuse me.

Muthafuckas was acting like they didn't see or hear us. It was like we was invisible.

I shook my head continuing to walk behind Bre.

Until all of sudden we came to a stop

"Excuse me," Bre spoke.

The dude looked at her and went back to doing what he was doing.

"Gurl hold on," I said signaling Bre to get behind me.

"Excuse me," I said tapping the dude arm.

When I tell y'all this dude ain't move a muscle, he didn't move a fucking muscle.

How can someone be so rude.

Like Who raised your weird ass?

I just got so irritated.

I hate a disrespectful ass person.

I mustered up all my strength before pushing him as hard as I could.

He instantly flew back falling on a couple of other people.

"Bruh What The Fuck," he screamed out getting up.

"That voice sounded so familiar," I thought.

He stood up Whipping his gun out. When everyone noticed what was happening, they scattered racing out of the club.

I looked back seeing Bre still behind me.

He walked closer putting the gun to my head.

When I realized who it was, I forgot how to breath.

It was the same dude that I had just got to arguing with at the store today.

I looked at him in utterly shock. A shiver went through my spine watching him cock the pistol.

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