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Plot Holes
Have you noticed any of these?
• Illogical Events
• Contradictions
• Dropped Plot Lines or Characters
• Unexplained Changes in Character or SettingInessentials
Have you noticed any of these?
• Unnecessary Scenes
• Clichés
• Repetition
• RedundanciesPacing
How does the story make you feel, in terms of its pace? Is it moving too fast or slow?ɪ ʟ ᴏ ᴠ ᴇ ʏ ᴏ ᴜ
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The Flip
Adventureto hold on, find something to live for; to let go, choose someone to die for.