⤷ interesting plot (10)
yes yes yes yes!! i loved it so much! i was hooked from the start!
+ 10 points
⤷ organization (10)
the story was very organized! everything flowed nicely.
+ 10 points
⤷ detail (5)
it was very detailed and descriptive! i loved when you described the ocean and oysterpaw's feelings!
+ 5 points
⤷ amount of words (5)
the limit was somewhere between 1,000-1,500, but you went around two hundred words over. i couldn't care less though hahaha. a good story needs no severe limitations (;
+ 5 points
⤷ turned in early (2)
got it!
+ 2 points
in total, you have received 32/30! good job!
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𝑙𝑎𝑣𝑒𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑟// warrior cat contests
عشوائي; 𝓁𝒶𝓋𝑒𝓃𝒹𝑒𝓇. ─────── warrior cat contests! run by ash.
