𝑙𝑎𝑣𝑒𝑛𝑑𝑒𝑟// warrior cat contests

𝘳𝘪𝘴𝘦𝘯_𝘱𝘩𝘰𝘦𝘯𝘪𝘹'𝘴 𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘺.

risen_phoenix

⤷ interesting plot (10)

the start "lilypadpaw was infected." had me on the edge of my seat already! loved it.

+ 10 points

⤷ organization (10)

the story was very organized! everything flowed nicely.

+ 10 points

⤷ detail (5)

it was very detailed and descriptive! your descriptions of the illness were awesome!

+ 5 points

⤷ amount of words (5)

the limit was somewhere between 1,000-1,500, and you nailed it!

+ 5 points

⤷ turned in early (2)

got it!

+ 2 points

in total, you have received 32/30! good job!