Circular Poem - With Eyes an Emerald Green

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Circular Poem

Write a short poem that begins and ends with the same line. The reader should feel differently about the line the second time around because of what has happened in the poem.

With Eyes an Emerald Green,

And thoughts turned cold with hate,

Seventh deadly sin,

Decides her unforgiving fate.

The long fingered vixen,

Narrowed jade is yearning,

Black heart knows Desire,

The woman,

With Eyes an Emerald Green.

Another Exercise thing I found on the internet :)

I'm actually pretty proud of this poem! It doesn't sound to random, and it's got a good flow, apart from the fourth line in the first verse...

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