Archlight(closed)

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(ThunderClan)(probably the last one for now until more people start commenting names and until I can get a closure on names)

Black-and-red Tom with blue eyes

Personality: this tom appreciates criticism. He loves to better himself for his own personal gain. Though he seems to let himself take in all the praises when he does something right. He's a very prideful and boastful cat to where others can rarely stand around him. Of course if someone would point this out he would try to better himself, but everyone's too nice to say so. He's also very reserved when alone, and sometimes hates it when others break his thoughts.

Winners
1. Archlight by @mintpelt1

Reasoning behind placement:

1// he's like a light that's bending, wanting to be a better cat, but can't.

2//he hates it when others break his thoughts like breaking light with dark night

3//he would be a better light, shining within the darkness if cats actually told him he was not as bright as he seems.

2. Archcedar by @Ginbellneko

Reasoning behind placement:

1// he wants to make himself better for his personal gain

2// he's prideful and boastful and seems like a tough cedar tree, but yet can be bent.

3//others can rarely stand him like a tree of cedar.

3. Archblaze by Zippy105

Reasoning behind Placement:

1//pelt color has red in it like a blazing fire with black ash surrounding it

2//he's reserved, and blazing fires tend to be reserved in an area by people

3// other cats can rarely stand around him like he's a blazing fire.

Nothing to say really. Except I hate this new writing thing because I had to rewrite some of that.

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