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Ok guys, this is my first story ever written, so please give me helpful judgements on my writing and grammar. And since I'm just starting out I haven't made for sure choices in name of the characters nor the backstory, so if something changes i will go back and fix it as well as warn y'all about the changes. There will be moments of smut in this story, so if you know you shouldn't be reading this then dont, even though you probably will anyway. Thanks for reading my rant and for trying out my book. Please enjoy😊😋

"problem?" He asked.
Backing out of the car, she straightened and held up a shoe that had slid out of the plastic bag.
"The Explorer ate my shoe."
Brone grinned crookedly. "Ate it, eh?"
Kali stared at the remaining shoe and moaned, "They were my favorite shoes."
Brone shifted his gaze from her pretty, flushed face framed with red hair and looked down at the shoe she held. He then blinked. Good Lord in heaven, the shoe was as red as a candy apple, the heel a good four or five inches high, and he immediately envisioned her wearing them and nothing else. And then he recalled that there was only one now and she'd never again wear them, naked or otherwise, and was nearly as distressed as Kali appeared to be.

I also don't know how far apart publishing chapters will be.
Hope you enjoyed this taste of what's to come.

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