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Meetings

No POV:
"Ah! SHANKS?!"he shouted startled "yeah it's me! Where are we?" He replied with

"I can answer that" said a mysterious female voice "your in my personal time space" she carried on with

"Would you mind telling us who you are and why we are here?" Said dragon who was quiet in the back along with the rest of the revolution

"Ah! Sorry! sorry! You can call me blaze! And your here to watch the life of the young Luffy there!" The girl now named blaze explained

"AHHHH!!!" Luffy suddenly screamed out of nowhere "luffy!? What happened?? You! What did you do to him!?" Questioned ace

"ME? I DID NOTHING!!!" I whined back "well then why is he screaming like that?!" He came back with and I replied with "I don't know! Ask his yourself!"

And so he did "w-why is there so many marines?!" Of course this made everyone around him facepalm "...you ONLY JUST REALISED THAT?!" Everyone asked in disbelief

"Yup" he simply said causing everyone to sweatdrop

Suddenly I shut everyone up by saying "ALRIGHT is everyone okay? can we start watching this now?" She was replied with nods from mist so she desired to start

"Makino! Makino! When is grandpa gonna get back?" Said a very young luffy "im not sure luffy why? Do you miss him?" The beautiful young lady named Makino said

"...yes..." luffy gave in looking sad and lonely " aww don't worry luffy! I'm sure Garp will be back soon!" She said in encouragement

"Aww she's nice!" Cooed Nami "what beauty that radiated from this Makino-swaaaann~!" Exclaimed Sanji "tch! Curly brows!" Groaned zoro "yohohoho!" Laughed Brooke whole the rest of the straw hats sweardropped

"Zoro! Minna! Your here!?" Cried a tearful Luffy "yes we are here captain..." whispered zoro in luffy's ear

"PIRATES ARE COMING! PIRATES ARE COMING!" Cried a distraught villager

Makino gasped in shock and fear and ran to the port after telling Luffy to stay in the bar (who obviously didn't)

All of the marines looked disgusted while shanks and his crew grinned knowingly but shanks was also a bit sad that Makino seemed scared of his (although he was a pirate)

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I'm sorry I didn't do more it was just that my fingers are not used to all this torture since I'm new to this! I mean   this IS my first fanfic so of course I will not be used to it but I did try my best so I hope you liked it!! ...aaannddd I'm ranting again... sorry about that

As I said before I appreciate constructive criticism but I will not tolerate hate here! And that's all for now!

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Bye my little neko's~