Gay people are not a plot twist, unless you're Carly Rae Jepsen.
Don't try to coerce your readers by demanding votes/comments.
Spend more words describing sceneries than your character's appearance.
Write and read fanfictions of things other than celebrities.
If (like me) you use fanfictions as a way to practice real writing, take writing them seriously. That includes plots, characters, subtext, character development, sceneries, sentence structure etc etc.
YOU ARE READING
Tips For Writing Fanfiction
RandomExactly what the title says. (If you have questions, you can PM me. I'll try to help. Or, you know, take any insults you want to throw at me.)