Play If Your Sure You Can Win (under Editing)

chapter 001 [ᴇᴅɪᴛᴇᴅ ʙʙʏᴢ]

Be you read here a few things

" . " this means someone is talking

' . ' or lean words this means the pov of the person is thinking

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means moments later

Before edit words counted:183
After edit words counted: 616 probably more later (scams)
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What is evil? -whatever spring form weakness ~

Friedrich Nietzsche

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3rd person pov

If i may, i'd like to pose an interesting question: 

Are all human being turely equal

These day everyehere you go you hear talk about the fight for equality as a wise man once said:

heaven does not create one person over another

people like to throw his words around,

that's not the whole quote he go on to say were 'all equal at birth,' pretty soon thing begin to change academic effort is what set some people above the others.

Anyways human change over time, truth to be told at the end of the day it just a fantasy and most of us live out lives denying the fact knowing we live in a meritocracy.

"Um excuse me sir, are you willing to give up your seat" a girl voice said dressing in the same school uniform as him,

"hm" Breaking out of his thought, He looked in the direction of the source to where the girl begin speak,

"That priority seating after all it only right of you to make this older woman to sit there" the girl said to the blond boy in front of her who looked like he's care less about priority seating and things.

"My my your such a pretty girl, I understand this is priority seating honey, but there no law forcing me to give this seat up, do you think because I'm young I have too stand up" the blond one said as he laughed at the end "what a bunch of ages nonsense"

"But she can barely stand up right" she said,

The argument went they until the old woman cut them off saying "to tell the truth dear, i don't mind standing, but thank you all the same."

The girl frowned

"Um excuse me, would anyone be will to give up the seat, for this sweet lady" she begged not giving up

"Over here ma'am I'll stand" a woman with dark hair said feeling pitful to the high school girl.

"Thank you very much ma'am" the other girl said.

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the bus took it final stop for the high school students to get off infront there new school made to ( lowkey forgot the reason inserts reasons )

Tokyo metricpalic advancing nurturing high school

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Tell me about any grammar errors or mis spelling of words

Edited a bit

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old version

Hina pov ( age 17 )

In the bus

I was sitting next to ayanokoji in the bus, when a girl asked a boy with blond hair "would you like to give up your this elder person" i looked to see a cute girl with large chest giving him reason why he should give up his seat i was so annoyed"over here" i responded. they walk over i got up and gave the woman a seat and i stood up for the rest of trip.

Few moments later

" look like we are here" i spoke quietly enough for koji to hear

"Yeah." he murmured clearly

"hey you!" me and koji look back, to see a girl with long black hair, " i saw you staring at me in the earlier in the bus."

"Oh sorry, i was seeing if you're like me"
Koji responded.

"How is that" she asked.

"Not to get involved" he stated.

"Im nothing like you" she shouted as she walk passed us.

"Let me guess a new tool" i questioned him

He smirked a nod slightly

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I know kinda cringey to be honest 😖

lowkey want to throw up

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