Part 14

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As suggested by Mansi08silawat I would like that you guys consider that dadi is bebe. The character will suit her more. I hope you guys have no problem with it?

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Neela- "Avni ko dekha! Kisi se ghr pe na pucha na btaya akele chali gyi Juhi ke ghr! Aaj wapas aane do usko btaungi mai!"

"Jao tum usse le aao" she pointed at Neil.

Neil- "Mai?" He asked surprised .

Neela- "nhi toh aur kisko bolungi mai Neil?"

Making faces Neil left.

Shweta- "yaar ab chali gyi thi toh enjoy Krlene dena tha na usse."

Neela- "ab toh ja chuka hai Neil aise bhi. Aur Avni ko aise bina btaye nhi jaana chahiye na jaan sookh jaati hai meri. Aaj wapas jldi aayegi toh usse akkal aayegi btakr jaane ki."

Shweta- "woh toh hai mgr abhi dekhna tum kaise dono ne raaste bhar ladte ladte aane hai, kit pit krte krte ."

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Neil was sitting on his bike, waiting for Avni. She came out and got up on his bike.

Neil- "aaye maharani hi aaye. Aaj toh ghr pe tumhe chappalon ki dawat milni hai."

Avni- "muhn bandh karro apna Neil."

Neil- "ab mera muhn agr koi bandh krwa skta hai na toh woh srf bhagwaan ji hai. Mai chup nhi hone waala."

It was then when Juhi came out with Avni's mobile . "Avni apna mobile andar bhool gyi tum yh lo." She handed over Avnis phone to her.

Juhi- "kaise ho Neil?" She asked smiling.

Neil ignored her and started the bike.

Avni- "yeh kya harkat hai Neil? Tumse haal chaal hi pucha tha na usne?"

Neil- "muhn nhi lgna mjhe us fassadan ke!"

Avni- "fassadan kisse kahan tumne " she exclaimed angrily and punched him violently on his back

He stopped the bike.

Neil- "utro meri bike se abhi ke abhi tum."

She got down.

Neil- "yeh mukka kis khushi mae maara hai tumne?"

Avni- "shukr karro ki srf mukka maara hai! Mera bas challe toh tmhara muhn noch lu mai" she said showing her nails.

Neil- "Avni batameezi na karro wrna bhagwan kasam mai yahin chodkr challa jaunga tumhe."

Avni- "jaana hai toh jao. Mjhe waise bhi apne ghr ka address maloom hai. So....." before she could complete he kicked his bike and went away shouting just a mere "Bye!".

Avni stood with her mouth wide open. She hadn't expected him to leave her like that in the middle of the road. "NEIL! NEIL!" She shouted, but he was gone.

She looked at her phone to find the battery dead.

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"Neil" dadi exclaimed as she saw him entering the lawn.

"Avni kahan hai?" She asked.

Neil- "usse mere saath aana manzoor nhi tha phle hi chali gyi thi woh." He lied and moved inside the house.

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Everyone including Neil was sitting in the living room.
Neela- "3 ghnte hogye hai kahan gyi yeh lrki aakhir. "

Ashish- "mera BP low ho rha hai. Kahan chali gyi meri bachi."

Shweta- "aap Avni ki us dost ko phone karre na!" Shweta suggested.

Neela called Juhi and put the call on speaker.

Neela- "beta tumhe pta hai Avni kahan hai? Tmhare ghr toh nhi aayi na wapas?"

Juhi -" yeh aap kya keh rhi hai aunty woh toh kabka nikal gyi thi na Neil ke saath. Aunty mae zara bahar aayi hui hn aapse baad mae baat krti hn." And she ended the call.

Everyone looked at Neil suspiciously now , while he sat with his head hung down.

"Kuch bolega tuh?" Prakash said raising his voice.

Neil in a slow voice , "humara jhagda hogya tha. Raaste mae chod aaya mai usse."

Neela- "tmhara dimaag toh kharab nhi hogya na. Aise kaise usse chod aaye beech raaste mae."

And Neela fainted onto the sofa. The ladies gathered and began helping her. Prakash got up from his seat and slapped Neil hard on his cheek.

Prakash clenching his fists, "Man toh kar rha hai ki tumhe leta kr itna maaru aur ginnu srf ek. Majaal dekho ghr ki bachi ko beech sarak pe akele chod kr aagya khabees!" He shouted.

Neil moved out of the room. "Tillu" shweta shouted from behind. Then facing Prakash she said to him in her as usual bold voice. "Mere munde nu kyu maara. Saari glti uski nhi ho skti hai. Avni ne bhi kch toh kiya hi hoga. Mai dono ko jaanti hn. Dono ki glti hai srf tillu ki nhi."

Prakash- "tum toh chup ho jao please shweta!"

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Neil sat on his bed, looking at his phone. Tears brimmed from his eyes as he stared at their picture together. The picture showed them fighting as usual.

As soon as he saw Ali entering the room, he wiped away his tears and kept his mobile aside.

Ali began angrily, "tumne acha nhi kiya Neil! Usse aise sarak ke beech mae chodkr aagye ho tum. Aisa krna se phle tumhe ek baar yeh Khyal nhi aaya ki agr usse kuch hojaye...."

"Kuch nhi hoga usse." Neil interrupted without letting Ali continue.

Neil- "usse kch nhi ho skta hai , mai jaanta hn" he said his voice shaking but still held confidence.

Ali's gaze softened seeing his emotional state.

Neil- "yaar mera toh dil kr rha hai mai hi kahin gayab ho jau."

Ali- "chup kr. Yeh fazool baatein na karro tum ab. Aur koi glt step nhi uthana hai tumne!"

Neil- "mjhse bht brhi glti hogyi hai yaar ali. Usse is trh raaste mae chodkr nhi aana chahiye tha. Usse ghr le aata, ghr aakr jitna krna lrhna hota lrh leta na mai. Mera hi dimaag kharab tha."

He folded his hands, closed his eyes, a tear rolled down his eyes, "bhagwaan ji Avni jahan bhi ho bas sahi salamat ho aur ghr aajaye. "

Ali- "yaar tum ainda aisa kbhi mat krna . Ainda ke liye lesson hai yh"

Neil- "agli baar kabhi kismat mauka degi bhi ya nhi usse lrhne ka".

Ali saw him breaking down and getting extremely hopeless. He moved forward and pulled him into a hug. Rubbing his back , consoling him.

Precap- "from jaani dushman to partners in crime. Beginning of friendship. "

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