Sans x Depressed!Frisk- The Beginning (WORK IN PROGRESS)

Chapter 2- Flowey

(hello hello readers! Um... Yeah, my beginning was bad... Looking forward to suggestions... Maybe Q and A... I'll answer anything. Have a good read...?)
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(Frisk's POV)

I walk down the corridor. It ends at a... Doorway? I walk through it. "I need to get back up..." I think. Looking around, I see a flower. It seemed very... Out of place. I scrutinize it further. Suddenly, I hear a voice. "Howdy! I'm Flowey! Flowey the flower! Heeheehee..." I look down. "The flower has a fucking face?!" "Gah!" I yelp. The flower keeps talking. "Why'd you make me introduce myself? It's a little rude to act like you don't know who I am." I can't move. "How the hell is it talking?!" "Someone ought to teach you proper manners!" It continues. "I guess little old me will have to do... Ready? Here we go!" My focus suddenly is only on the flower. I see a floating heart? "See that red heart?" He asks, "That is your soul. The very culmination of your being!" I am very confused right now. "It starts off weak, but you can grow strong if you gain a lot of LV." I give 'Flowey' a confused look and ask: "What does LV stand for?" He replies:"What's LV stand for? Why, love of course!" "Hmm." I think. "You want some love don't you?" Flowey inquired. I nod. "Don't worry, I'll share some with you!" He says. "Down here, love is shared through... Little white... 'friendliness pellets." I continue listening. "Are you ready?" Flowey waited for my response. I think. "This is a little suspicious..." I see white 'pellets' move towards my soul. Nope! "Move your soul and try to catch as many as you can!" Flowey says. I narrow my eyes and dodge. Flowey looks mildly annoyed and says: "Hey buddy, you missed them. Let's try again, okay?" More pellets are propelled towards my soul. I keep dodging. Flowey adopts a pained expression. "Is this a joke? Are you braindead?" He says. I keep looking at him. "Run. Into. The. Bullets!!!" He demands. Another round bombards the area around your soul, but he misses. His face turned evil. "YoU kNoW wHaTs GoInG oN hErE, dOn'T yOu?" said Flowey. "YoU jUsT wAnTeD tO wAtCh Me SufFeR." I paled. Bullets surrounded my soul, there was no way out... "DiE." Flowey rasped.