Why is my book not getting reads, votes or comments?
Where am I going wrong?
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Just a small complements about your book my sweetie .😘😘
I like your way of writing , it's kinda of childish and a mixture of matured in your writing . I really love your writing .
My favorite chapter is : "As beautifulas voldemort" . It's too good , I was giggled a lot by seeing Laura's reaction towards Zayn . It's too funny. And the intro of Zayn was amazing .
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I liked this joke a lot , 🤣🤣🤣
Now coming for the personal suggestions :
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Kindly , don't use these words too much . Use different with the same meaning .
Now coming for the review :
Title : it's damn nice , I'm loving it , it's too catchy ( garde :A+)
Blurb : it's too lengthy and make it short and sweet . ( Grade : B+)
Cover : your cover is too clumsy and it's not catching the readers eyes . And I liked your subtitle is too good .
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My friend opinion for your cover too .
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So, change it kindly , it's my foremost request to you . But, I like this cover .
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And you can go for further cover . Do it yourself ,so that you can know where you done mistake . Coz .... I'm a designer ,so I'm suggesting you to change the cover . If you like my suggestion change it or else don't want . ( Grade : C -).
Prologue : Gone forever . The title is too nice , it's too apt for the plot. (Grade : B+ ).
Character development : you've chosen the characters correctly for the roles . ( Grade : A-)
Character sketch : I like Laura's character ,compared to everyone . You just molded each and every character superbly hands off 👏👏. (Grade: B+ ).
Plot : seriously ,it's too good I loving it a lot . ( Grade : A+)
Grammar : I didn't spot any grammar, coz ......your grammar is too good ..........( Grade: A+ ).
Flow of continuation of story :
It's smoothly moving with a flow . It seems like a "peanut butter on bread" . I like your way of explaining the story . ( Grade : A -).
Ending : it's absolutely a nice try 🤝.
Here we go for the total marks for 💯.
63 / 100.
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