Special thanks to our best mystery/thriller Judge ExrineanceTo the winners, do you want me to post the stickers here, or would you rather send me your email?
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01 A Peek into the Past by Monica_Ahuja
✔Book Cover - 7/10
✔Blurb - 8 /10
✔Plot - 14/15
✔Creativity - 18/20
✔Opening Chapter - 5/5
✔Story Flow - 9/10
✔Characters - 8/10
✔Grammar & Punctuations - 10/10
✔Overall Review - 9/10
TOTAL 88/100Message:
The story was full of action from the beginning until the latest chapter. The length of every chapter was enough to hold the tensions and emotions of the scenes. It was great, just I didn't get the mystery/thriller vibe when I looked at the book cover and the blurb.02 A Psychopath's Collection by commanderbubblegum
✔Book Cover - 8/10
✔Blurb - 9/10
✔Plot - 14/15
✔Creativity - 18/20
✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
✔Story Flow - 9/10
✔Characters - 8/10
✔Grammar & Punctuations - 8/10
✔Overall Review - 9/10
TOTAL 87/100Message:
I like how you connect the abduction of the characters in a single scene. It was the first time for me to encounter something like that and it impressed me. Just describe the character's appearance and the settings of the story in more detail.> 03 A Trail of Blood by AreumNaeil
> ✔Book Cover - 9/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 20/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 5/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 8/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 10/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 93/100
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> Message:
> It was like I was reading some script from a movie. It got me hooked from the very first chapter. From the description of the characters to the narration of the scenes, everything was precise. It doesn't have any flowery words which makes readers easy to read.
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> 04 Bewitched Hearts by _niffler_
> ✔Book Cover - 8/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 13/15
> ✔Creativity - 20/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 9/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 10/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 91/100
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> Message:
> The theme of the story was close to reality which is very great. It mirrored the life of someone struggling to survive in a harsh society under unfortunate circumstances. The flow was smooth and it wasn't too slow to be a bore nor too fast to be flabbergasted.> 05 Counselling Charlie by the_dreamweaver
> ✔Book Cover - x/10
> ✔Blurb - x/10
> ✔Plot - x/15
> ✔Creativity - x/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - x/5
> ✔Story Flow - x/10
> ✔Characters - x/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - x/10
> ✔Overall Review - x/10
> TOTAL x/100
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> **I couldn't find the author. I don't know if it's because of the wrong tag or the author is inactive anymore.
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> 06 Highschool Detectives by fabulousathena
> ✔Book Cover - 10/10
> ✔Blurb - 8/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 9/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 8/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 89/100
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> Message:
> The story was great. It started in a light demeanor which is good so that readers won't be overwhelmed on a sudden serious or heavy scene. Just take note of this, do not use any sound effects like "riiinngg" and "beep beepp". Use more descriptive words that would make readers imagine the scenes.> 07 I Can See the Future by VimLights
> ✔Book Cover - 10/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 8/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 9/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 90/100
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> Message:
> The story was not just a mystery/thriller, it has a flavor of supernatural ability. It was clean that I didn't see anything wrong in terms of technicalities. Maybe add some description of their appearance and their surrounding, then the story would be almost perfect.
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> 08 Melting Hearts by Seath05
> ✔Book Cover - 8/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 8/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 8/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 87/100
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> Message:
> It felt like the story was about the dark side of love. From the very first chapter, the scene was heavy that I really felt the emotions expressed by the characters. It was so good but the story really need some proofreading. There are some technicalities that was so hard not to notice.> 09 Raegan Economics by brhr14
> ✔Book Cover - 9/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 13/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 9/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 8/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 88/100
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> Message:
> I like the way you narrate the scenes. It wasn't exaggerated but every word are fitted with each other but there are still minor technicalities. The mystery in the story was gradually intensifying as I went further unto the chapters.
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> 10 The Oracle in the Dust by triothethird
> ✔Book Cover - 10/10
> ✔Blurb - 8/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 8/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 9/10
> ✔Overall Review - 8/10
> TOTAL 88/100
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> Message:
> This is a fantasy/thriller story which gave me a new taste among the stories I was judging. This was a rollercoaster ride for me because I felt numerous emotions while I was reading the story, thumbs up!> 11 When The Rain Starts Pouring by CodeAllen
> ✔Book Cover - 8/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 14/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 5/5
> ✔Story Flow - 9/10
> ✔Characters - 9/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 10/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 91/100
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> Message:
> I like that you write paragraphs with indention because that is what is supposed to be the proper way to write a paragraph. You vividly describe the scenes and that helps me imagine and feel the suspense in the story. The cover does not give the mystery/thriller vibes although the umbrella is definitely connected to the title.
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> 12 Wreckage by TejashreeSubhashAyre
> ✔Book Cover - 9/10
> ✔Blurb - 9/10
> ✔Plot - 15/15
> ✔Creativity - 18/20
> ✔Opening Chapter - 4/5
> ✔Story Flow - 10/10
> ✔Characters - 8/10
> ✔Grammar & Punctuations - 9/10
> ✔Overall Review - 9/10
> TOTAL 91/100
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> Message:
> The story is very cool, honestly. I like to flow of the story, the romance and the mystery is well balanced. I was like reading some movie script because the story felt like it could become a movie. Thumbs up to you, author. Just an advice, you could describe your characters, the setting of the story, and the scenes more vividly so that readers can picture out the scenes more easily.Congratulations to the winners! (Again, should I post the stickers here or your email?)
2nd runner up - VimLights
1st runner up- _niffler_ // TejashreeSubhashAyre // Code Allen
Overall winner - AreumNaeil
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