Okay I have sat here and allowed all the harsh criticism I can take on this HORRIBLY written short story. So with great pleasure I'm going to be sitting down tonight and rewrite/edit. It will more than likely be WAY different once I'm done, but I'm hoping I can give you a better experience with my original vision I had for this.
It probably won't be done in a few days as I'm a devoted stay at home mom to two toddlers one having disabilities. I will try my best to have it completed ASAP! As always I love you guys, and please leave any advice or anything you'd like to see in the new version!
Also made a Twitter if y'all are interested in interacting! @fatallylily
My Instagram is @lilyodellwrites
With love as always, Lily 🖤
10/30/2020
YOU ARE READING
What If It's Right?
Teen FictionSome may say it's wrong to love someone older than you. Let alone your dad's bestfriend. Others may be doing it themselves, but you can't let others tell you who to love. It may be wrong in the way they see it, but then again what if it's right?
