[ Spill The Tea Sis; edisi tips author wattpad ]
Assalamualaikum and hi. Saya di sini hanya untuk berkongsi sedikit tips dan talk untuk adik-adik yang sedang berjinak-jinak untuk menulis buku sendiri. Good luck 🍀
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amazing c...
Okaylah tukan ? Tahu tak betapa susahnya nak cipta tajuk untuk sesuatu cerita. Menarik apa tajuk gituw.
[Cover: 7/10]
Letak all the characters in the cover, mantap. Cantik ♥️
[Description: 8/10]
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[Penggunaan bahasa: 6/10]
–ayat awak: Abangnya Jaydan yang melihat adiknya lalu pergi ke arahnya. –boleh dibaiki: Abangnya, Jaydan yang melihat dirinya terus berjalan ke arahnya.
–ayat awak: memberitahu kepada Rayyan –boleh dibaiki: memberitahu Rayyan
–ayat awak: " Mana kau pergi semalam ? " tanya kawannyaiaitu Mya.
" Tak pergi mana pun, " balas Mya.
*supposed to be "balas Hanie". small things matter ♥️
–and one more comment..
Rayyan is a vampire right ? And he's 20 years old ?! Biasanya vampire umur beratus or beribu 😂 and they'll still look young cuz they're vampire right ? HAHAHAHA donno ah, up to youlah. Your story not mine lol
[Jalan cerita: 6/10]
To be honest, I'm actually not a big fans of vampire's story except for TWILIGHT. Your storyline ? Can ah. Best apa. It's not that bad but you can fix it to make it better. But it's up to you ♥️ That's your story, not mine.
[Keseluruhan: 68/100]
Alhamdulillah okaylah tu ♥️ You're already good but make it better. Trust yourself, I believe you can. Teruskan menulis, lama-lama nanti kita tak akan ada masalah lagi dah. Even I'm still learning, aku dah 5 tahun dekat wattpad and still make mistakes. It's okay to ask ♥️
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p/s: no hurt feelings eh ? I'm just being honest and try to help each other. Kalau terkecil hati, mohon maaf :)
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