OKAY HEY YALL IM BACK LIKE A THOUSAND FREAKING MONTHS LATER ALSKAL.
NOW I YELL EVERY TIME I RESD THIS STORY LIKE WHAT ITS KINDA CRINGY. "she looked him up and down and bit her lip slightly" LIKE WHAT ALWOSLA HELP.
IS THIS ONE OF THOSE KOMENTS WHEN U WRITE SOMETHINF AS A NAIVE PERSON AND THEN MONTHS OR YEARS LATER AFTER GETTINF A BETTER HUMOR AND GROWING UP A LITTLE U RESD UR STORIES AND UR LIKE "WTF IS THIS"
I'm freaking out right now wtf did I write omfg this is so embarrassing
It's not that bad but it's just so awkward to read out like im freaking embarassed
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Biana & Tam: Love Story
RomanceHi there! This will be my first fan fiction I've ever wrote, so feel free to comment some constructive criticism if there is something you don't like! This short story will be a love story for Biana Vacker and Tam Song, from the Keeper of the Lost...
