Feedbackplease Stories

So, I've been working on a few different stories recently to improve my writing, many of which being JJK stories! None of them have progressed much (I think the longest...

In 1996, A young man with a quiet life makes a strange discovery that alters his sense of reality; nothing makes sense, as he is somehow transported into the future- all...

just some stuff I wrote that I need constructive criticism, feedback and tips for please give me ur opinion!!!!!

Hello! this is my first time sharing any of my poetry online. I usually keep my poetry private so yeaa. I am still learning to revise and make my pieces better s...

....I'm just spamming y'all sorry- {Might be deleted because of r e a s o n s} Just want some feedback on it-

Idk yet. this was based off a dream that I had last night

Here I will upload ... Stories for school! never woulda guessed huh?

Well these are some random sory ideas sitting around in my head so yeah. Tell me what you think! They might even become reality with enough feedback....

just a series of random short stories and weird thoughts by me, the stories will mainly be fantasy and maybe a bit of horror here and there. if you do choose to read thi...

This is a fantasy story about a boy living in a land ruled by a tyrant. Poverty, and crime are rampant in the streets and he took to stealing for survival but gets caugh...

Short stories for several other stories I'm writing. Give me feedback. Some spoilers may be in order.

Murder Mystery. Part 3 done! Will add more soon. First piece, please give feedback NO HATE. ~Updated 1/1/17

The world has been thrown into chaos, cause the world knows of the existence of vampires. That they have been living along side them for centuries without being discover...

A short story I wrote as part of a transfer application into the Tisch School of the Arts. It's something I wrote a while ago and now that it's time for submission, I'm...

I'll write more if you guys like it!

Note on this first part of my ultimate story and first piece, any of my writings are to be approached with an open mind and are made as 'food for thought', for it is you...

Short story. I would love to hear your feedback and constructive criticism on improving my short story. Thank you :)

Shane Gastling must cross to the most dangerous part of his land to defeat an enemy more powerful than any, the Immortal Master. He must hurry, before the Master's army...