Lookingforfeedback Stories

Scarred from past experiences, Scarlet does her best to protect her shattered family. From police to friends, no one can be trusted. As her past tried to recapture her...

Separated when it happened. A family try's to reunite and get to a place we're that can ride out the upcoming storm the apocalypse will inevitably bring. Dive-in and bec...

Aelynn, Commander of the 4th Legion is ordered to sail south to Sienan in order to secure an alliance but only under the condition that she takes out a vampire plaguing...

Idea for a new fantasy race, looking for feedback, will add more in the future.

This is a work in progress that may become the prologue to a longer story if I can figure out where to go with it. So for this one I'm looking for feedback, suggestions...