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A-kun_Kaslana
MebankerRani
Hey Author, I reread the Valkyrie Oratoria and saw that Sigrid ranked up to level 7 during the Great Feud and you also wrote that she again ranked up to level 7 after coming back from her journey. I want to ask if is it on purpose or did I miss something?
A-kun_Kaslana
@ MebankerRani Did I? I don't know but she can rank up to level 8 now in the current story progress.
JPX_94
Hello. You still not well?
A-kun_Kaslana
@ JPX_94 I am well again... just a bit busy. The next chapter would come out tomorrow or today with luck :D
JPX_94
Are you ok?
nanhthawathsawatdy
are you well?
Sorara365
Is Senti going to take over Fu Hua’s body like in the game?
nanhthawathsawatdy
Let me ask you something. In the story of Uncle Takumi, the person who always sells sweets to Siri, how old was he then and how old is he now?
Navarius13
Hey A-Kun :)
I'm a fairly new writer especially when it comes to fics.
Any advice you can share with your junior over here to help grow a story?
Also, how are you posting multiple 40-minute-long chapters a week that can't be good for your health?
A-kun_Kaslana
@Navarius13 Sounds interesting. The danmachi power system is easy to keep consistent, but I've found a few books where there are moments that don't make sense, where the MC is overpowered but, due to the plot, needs to be taken out by monsters the MC can easily defeat, for example.
Navarius13
@A-kun_Kaslana Thanks for the Advice man going for the amnesiac route where the MCs abilities are based of his understanding but since he cant remember anything... So the more he remembers the stronger he will become and since it is the Danmachi leveling system it's not too hard to keep a consistent level of power
A-kun_Kaslana
@Navarius13 I have a little vacation and have nothing better to do after a hour gaming and reading so yeah... Anyway. Tips: Clearly define a unique and compelling premise. Focus on developing memorable protagonists and meaningful supporting characters, while building a consistent world as the story unfolds. Balance gripping action with thoughtful moments, and ensure emotional resonance through relatable plot lines and compelling character development. Write vivid, expressive dialogue and scenes. Maintain a regular writing routine, actively engage with readers for feedback, draw inspiration from books, anime, manga, and light novels or even fanfiction to learn narrative techniques, and avoid common mistakes like cliches or overpowered characters. If you're going for overpowered, you need to do it right: with consistent power and a good plot.
Tempestlana69
1000 followers when?
RyurenAkagane
Hello A-kunZX, first of all, I have to say that I liked your stories, but I'm here to make a request, if possible. I would like you to do some art, drawing, image, etc., however you see it, about a specific character.
Serafall Leviathan with its Devil Trigger version, if you know what that is, I also have the specifications.
"Her skin was an icy blue, with something resembling scales made of tiny crystals. Two large, segmented black horns curved from her forehead, surrounding her head like a crown. Her long hair had grown even longer, now pure white, extending beneath her naked body like sinuous snakes. A pair of slanted eyes, a fascinating shade between purple and dark blue, stared back."
"She ran her hand between her breasts and I went down to her navel. Her body had changed: larger breasts, a slimmer waist, thicker thighs. Her belly looked even more toned. A finger, with a nail so sharp it tore her skin, slid across it. Her blood had shades of blue.
Her tongue was long, purple, and rough like a cat's, but forked like a snake's.
As she stood up, she noticed she was a little taller. Then there were the twelve beautiful, glittering wings made of ice crystal scales that had grown from her back.
She also had a tail.