BeautyxXxLuver

@rebel12 haha that is awesome! ^-^

BeautyxXxLuver

Get out your guns, 
          battles begun,
          are you a sin, or a sinner?
          If loves a fight,
           than I shall die,
          with my heart on a trigger.
          They say before you start a war,
          you better know what you're fighting for.
          Well baby, you are all that I adore
          if love is what you need,
           a soldier I will be.
          I'm an angel with a shotgun,
          fighting til' the wars won,
          I don't care if heaven won't take me back.
          I'll throw away my faith, babe,
           just to keep you safe.
          Don't you know you're everything I have?
          ..and I, wanna live, not just survive, tonight.
          Sometimes to win, 
          you've got to sin,
          don't mean I'm not a believer
          ...and major Tom, will sing along.
          Yeah, they still say I'm a dreamer.

BeautyxXxLuver

@Bigchick7 Thank you so much, Im glad you enjoyed Look Right Through Me! Your feed back is appreciated. c: 
           I will be sure to check out Wings, right after I fan you back! ;)
          
          ..And FYI Its perfectly fine to ask other writers for a little constructive criticism (Thats what Watty's about! ^-^).. If anyone says different than... poo on them...

Bigchick7

Hi! :) just a new fanner of yours... Hehe (; wanted to say that I love your story, Look Right Through Me!! Can't wait for you to keep writing. Oh, & I hope this doesn't sound rude or whatever- but, if u have the chance, read my new book? Its called Wings.I'm just starting out in Wattpad & would love if someone like you read it. Thanks! <3 :-)