MelissaDemke

Hello readers,
          	
          	For this week I have revised and edited (and basically rewrote) chapter ONE. I will remove the other chapters temporarily so I can tweak them and fit the changes necessary for them to make sense following chapter one's changes. I hope you enjoy them as I've been working hard all week to portray my characters and story line better! Feedback welcome. <3 Thank you

MelissaDemke

Hello readers,
          
          For this week I have revised and edited (and basically rewrote) chapter ONE. I will remove the other chapters temporarily so I can tweak them and fit the changes necessary for them to make sense following chapter one's changes. I hope you enjoy them as I've been working hard all week to portray my characters and story line better! Feedback welcome. <3 Thank you

MelissaDemke

Hello everyone! I'm doing some big updates and changes with my first three chapters to add some meat and history to my characters to be more enjoyable to read. I will update everyone when I have revised the chapters. I would be so grateful for any feedback! Thank you for all who have read so far! (life of writing a first draft! ^.^)

MelissaDemke

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