Hello! I'm a teen writer just looking for some feedback on my books so I can grow as a writer and maybe publish my own novel one day! Hope you enjoy my  stories despite their lack of professionalism. Hope you have a wonderful day!

Uh, yeah. So that is all true. Just kind of lacks personality, if you know what I mean. I'm an animated person and that "about" that I wrote a bit ago just doesn't show it. Nor does it tel you much "about" me. Which I supposed it's supposed to do. Ahem (I'm dramatically cracking my knuckles in order to type this just for you).

1) Yes, I really am just a teenager.
2) I have no clue what I'm doing.
3) Never have a set plan for any story. <- reason why I haven't finished one.
4) I lack firsthand knowledge in a lot of subjects.
5) Most stuff's about how I imagine things to be because I don't actually know.
6) I'll let you know if I'm writing about something that has to do with what I personally have been through.
7) I'm still kinda innocent to a lot so... Keep in mind when reading what I'm writing!
8) ... I do happen to have a dark sense of humor and have no trouble making my characters walk through Hell and back.
9) Not all stories I write are going to have a happy ending. Because sometimes a dark ending is a lot of fun!
10) I swear I'm not insane, I just like action and drama. Because all that makes a GREAT story and, after all, stories are my thing!
11) I NEVER MEAN TO OFFEND ANYONE!! Please, PLEASE, let me know if I do! I never want to exclude or put down anyone or idea/belief. I try to include as much diversity as I can but I do struggle because there's so much and I still only know so little. But I'm willing to learn! So, if you're comfortable, please help me (preferably without bashing me, though)!
12) Why didn't I make 11 number 1 instead? Seriously, Marianna! Use your head a little more! You've got one!

It's just sometimes a little too full of air instead of actual brain.
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ichosemyusername ichosemyusername Nov 07, 2021 03:44AM
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