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Summary:- The book is about Scarlette, the crowned queen of Druids. This book revolves around her life, full of adventure and dangers as well. In the hunt for Xanthius, Scarlette and Lucian journeyed through the White Woods. On their way deciphering more about Soleil and of course the sceptical behaviour of Darius.
First impression:- The story interesting. Definitely interesting but it's difficult to understand the story. The plot requires a lot of concentration.
Cover:- Needs a lot of work. I suggest you approach a cover shop asap.
Title:- Title of the book is nice. Its best suited for the book.
The plot of the story is beautiful. But one little fact is that there is a little difficulty in understanding the plot because the starting part had Shyllo and Meredith which confused me like hell but then, later on, I deciphered why and what was it for(not gonna give spoilers). The plot took its best turn when Scarlett and Lucian went on to search for Xanthius in the white woods. Apart from these I really liked Adam and Fin. Those supporting characters were really entertaining. Darius was under my suspicion throughout the story.
Description:- I would really say the story is well described. Each and every detail was well contemplated. However, at any point, I was confused between dialogues. Example:-
"Half waypoint? I thought that was just a rumour." I gestured.....
Now here the thing that creates confusion is who spoke the dialogue. Because the description or words next to it suggest Scarlett but its actually Lucian. It isn't that big of a problem but if it kinda rectified then it would be even better to avoid confusion. You can write the dialogues in a line and change the line to contemplate the thoughts of the protagonist. This would avoid confusion into who spoke the dialogue. Other than this the story is entertaining at every aspect.
Writing style and suggestions:- Your writing style is worth appreciating because it's brilliant. Every small detail was taken care of. Be it the description of the serenity or the thoughts of the protagonist. I loved the conversation between little Adam and Lucian. You were successfully able to display Adam's innocence perfectly. Just a little confusion in understanding story and dialogues was there.
Suggestions:-
1) So firstly I would suggest you work on the cover. It can be better and cover attracts a reader as well. A beautiful cover will add more attraction to your book. If you have a problem in approaching a cover shop, you can take my help. :-)
2)Edit some parts of dialogues where they create confusion into understanding who spoke what.
Word of praise:-
With criticism also comes acknowledging a writer's efforts. I am sure it must be so hard to write a story with perfect grammar(there I said it, not even one error). This skill develops with time and you, my friend already have it. Your vocabulary is pretty impressive. Good Luck for future endeavours.
Hope you love this review. Do comment and share your feedback with us. Thank you, Siya for the brief review. Love you! Take care!
