Author: MamaMochiii
Reviewer: Nandu
Hi, friend! How are you? Hope you are going well.
I am publishing this review as soon as I finished your first to seven chapters. This is not rushed, rather there are some things I would like to tell you!
Cover and Title: Cover is just the chef's kiss! I really loved this cover. It already gives you a hint that the story is not an ordinary love story! Your Cover plays a great role in captivating the reader's attention. I am so proud of your skill in the cover.
I am not a big fan of your title, to be frank. If possible, can you please mention here *comment* why you made this the title?
My rating on your cover: 4.5/5
Blurb: Your blurb is a bit messy. I would highly recommend you to make some changes to it.
Original Blurb:
❝𝐏𝐥𝐞𝐚𝐬𝐞, 𝐡𝐨𝐥𝐝 𝐦𝐞 𝐜𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐫❞
𝘐𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝘢 𝘤𝘶𝘳𝘪𝘰𝘶𝘴 𝘨𝘪𝘳𝘭 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘭𝘰𝘳𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘰𝘱 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘬𝘴 𝘪𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘢 𝘩𝘪𝘥𝘥𝘦𝘯 𝘱𝘢𝘴𝘴𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘢𝘵𝘩𝘳𝘰𝘰𝘮. 𝘞𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘨𝘰 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦?
"𝙃𝙤𝙡𝙙 𝙪𝙥, 𝙬𝙝𝙮 𝙙𝙞𝙙 𝙏𝙖𝙚𝙝𝙮𝙪𝙣𝙜 𝙘𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙖𝙩𝙝𝙧𝙤𝙤𝙢 𝙨𝙤𝙖𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙚𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙡𝙚𝙖𝙫𝙚𝙨 𝙞𝙣 𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙝𝙖𝙞𝙧?"ᴀ ᴋɪᴍ ᴛᴀᴇʜʏᴜɴɢ Fᴀɴfɪᴄᴛɪᴏɴ
*edited module*
" Please, hold me closer," he said.
"Hold up, but why did Taehyung come out of the washroom wet and covered in leaves,? Don't you feel something fishy?" Y/n said.
Y/n is a curious young lady employed in a shop. One day she happens to find out a hidden passage in the work place's restroom! Will she be brave enough to explore this unknown world? Will this pathway change her life, forever?
I love, how you are consistent in your work! I highly recommend you only to use a single font to the entire blurb.
My rating: 2.5/5
Story and Grammar: Your first page is so well written! I am kind of greedy for the same in the upcoming chapters. You have some mistakes in your book, but it is acceptable! Your presentation is just eye captivating. The right use of images and gifs is so impressive!
Rating:3.5/5
Storyline: I am in love with Y/n's elder sister. She is so cute and relatable. Your story took a very drastic turn after the first 3 chapters. I am okay with it but I am not sure about others. Your storytelling is one of my favourites, just the first-person narration. It is a creative plot.
My rating:3/5
Overall enjoyment: 3/5 I am sure it will be better in the upcoming chapters!
To the readers: Bored of the Ceo and Y/n stories? Guess what! This is a cool book to check out! A Kim Taehyung fanfic with some relatable characters. Don't dare to underestimate this writer's skill! She will leave you amazed with a bunch of emotions throughout the story. it is set in an alternate universe, so fantasy lovers should surely check out this tale! If you have already read this book, please share your views with us.
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