Hi, Dear! How are you? Hope you are doing well! Peter Pan here! I am really, sorry because I could not read your book. I am in a very hectic schedule at the moment. Moreover, I am not a Potter Head. Don't Worry! I made my bestie, read and review your book on my behalf. I hope you like it!
Author: heerxm20
Reviewer: Miss Love aka MissOt7Nup Special reviewer, because I have no idea about Harry Potter world. 😖
Miss Love's Review on your book:
Heyyyyyyyyyyy .. pottery army!!!
Nice to see ya!!!
Alright back to the review ...
Book cover- it's Hogwart's grand hall... But I would've appreciated a cover with Fred
Rating- 3/5
Grammar - Absolutely amazing grammar with some minute mistakes which are understandable.
Rating: 4/5
Blurb- it's short and sweet and also attractive!
Story knowledge - since it's a potter fic you need to know some basics of the wizarding world and you are almost perfect (your potions are a bit weak)... But who pays attention to snape anyways?
Rating - 4/5
Story plot- the story is cool in the beginning but I lose interest in the last chapters and it is kinda vague as to how hazel ends up in the kitchen drunk over her breakup when it never happened and they sorted it... Also, I would love more magic here like Fred using magic to make her happy and stuff ... The story is incomplete so I think there will be some secrets too so yeah that's all
Rating 3.5/5
To the readers- The book is really cool if you ever had a Weasley twin fetish (coz I did ಠ◡ಠ) ... And some magic smut and also if you haven't read the HARRY POTTER SERIES you won't get some stuff so do some research first
Signing off~~~
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