GraywingxTurtletail

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As you probably know by now, I prefer Gray Wing and Slate, but this isn't bad. Honestly I love how Gray Wing was a fatherly figure to so many cats, (Jagged Peak, Thunder, Pebble heart, *forgets Turtle Tails other children*). My only issue is that Gray Wing realizes he loves her after she leaves and gets a mate like- wut- perhaps jealousy, after all everyone always told Gray Wing that Turtle Tail was perfect for him, I think that just made him think that they actually were made to be together. He wasn't as grief-stricken as I though he would be. Plus, he's been in "love" with a lot of cats before. (Brightstream, Storm, Turtle Tail, Slate). So I see it more as a childhood crush type of thing.

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