magnum pi: the white knights savior (rewrite)

chapter 9

Magnum watches as Mr.. smith falls to the ground. Emma turns towards him and that's when he sees her collapse. "Emma." screams Magnum as he runs over to Emma. That's when he sees the blood, Emma had been shot on the left side of her abdomen. "Dad go leave me" said Emma. "No I'm not leaving you." replied Magnum as he picked her up. as magnum ran throw the forest with Emma in his arms he was having flashbacks to when he had to carry his wife out of the forest after she had been shot while on a pi case. He could see Emma started to go unconscious. "Emma stay with." cried Magnum. Magnum runs through out the woods but somehow ends up back right where they started. he was getting frustrated but that's when he saw that one of the dead men had a radio. he careful put Emma down and grabbed the radio. he trade several different frequency's until he heard a familiar voice. "Gordy its Magnum". yelled Magnum into the radio." Where are you and is Emma with you?" questioned Katsumoto. "where at a big cabin number 108,I have Emma buts she been shot and its bad." cried Magnum. "Ok stay where you are and we will come to you but it might take us awhile to get to you." feared katsumoto. "please hurry and call TC and make sure he's ready with his chopper." commanded magnum.

Magnum ran into the cabin and found a couple of towels that he could use to try and stop Emma's bleeding. He ran over to her and put pressure on Emma's gunshot wound. "Dad tell me a story." requested Emma. "ok...once upon a time there was a young navy seal who was deployed in Afghanistan. this navy seal loved his job and had 2 marine brothers and a fellow navy seal brother. he was also in love with a beautiful woman, he was so in love with her that he was going to marry her. until one day the woman betrayed him and his brothers by giving there location to the Taliban in exchange for gold. the navy seal and his 3 brothers were thrown into a pow camp, where the 4 of them would remain for 270 days". stated magnum. "Daddy this is your story isn't it?" questioned Emma. "yes it is." smiled magnum.

he checked Emma's wound and luckily he had gotten the bleeding to stop. "needless to say the navy seal wasn't a model prisoner. he tried to steal a gun, a radio and so the guards would throw him in the hole which was basically solitary confinement. it was dark, lonely and he was scared and he new that anyday could be his last but he knew he had to survive and get his brothers and himself out of the camp and back home, He owned them that especially after they saved him after he was shot by one of the guards. so one day they did just that. they waited till guard change and fought there way out getting the guards guns and shooting there way out. they got out of there and ran until they were rescued by some us marines that were driving around looking for IEDs. they had there injuries treated and then they were honorably discharged and sent home. no longer in the navy the naval seal and his 3 buddies at the suggested of brothers decided to move to Hawaii. one opened his own helicopter business, the second one worked as a bar tender and later opening his own and the 3rd he opened a marine salvage company. as for the navy seal he became a private investigator and he meet a very rich writer who aloud him to stay in the guest house of his huge estate in exchange for letting him write novels about him and being is head of security ....."said magnum before being interrupted. "Thomas?" cried Higgins

Magnum stopped and turned towards his wife who was running over to him. "Where's katsumoto?" questioned Magnum. "I don't know I've been searching for you and Emma on my own, oh my god has Emma been shoot. "Mommy I'm okay daddy was in the middle of telling me a story, right daddy?" questioned Emma. "Right where was I...oh yes. The navy seal agreed to the rich writers offer but he made the mistake of showing up a day early, where he was promptly attack by the vicious guard dogs..."stated magnum. "hold up Zeus and Apollo did not attack you, they growl at you but they didn't attack you and they were certainty not vicious." defended Higgins. "Those two hounds of hell attacked me everyday." stated magnum. "They did not" argued Higgins. "Please stop making me laugh, it hurts." begged Emma. "Sorry moving on with the story. the navy seal was being growled at by the guard dogs and that's when a beautiful British,most frustrating woman he had even meet walked out and called off her dogs. This woman was a former MI6 agent who had watched the man she was planning to marry get murdered. needless to say they were both trying to heal from there own heart break and personal trauma. the navy seal began working PI cases to which he was able to persuade the ex MI6 agent to help him and later she agreed to be his PI partner and together they saved many lives and helped a lot of people. after two years of getting to know each other, the navy seal feel in love with her but sadly while on a case the ex MI6 agent was shot and he almost lost her. she survived and later started dating her doctor..." continued magnum. "wait hold up,mom you dated your doctor? "questioned Emma in disbelief. "yes and I know weird but that was a long time ago. magnum just continue the story" pleaded Higgins

Magnum looked over at his wife and gave her a smile while trying to hold back tears. "as much as the navy seal wanted to tell the ex-MI6 agent how he felt but he couldn't because she was falling for the doctor and he knew his heart could take her rejecting him. until one day he finally mustered up the courage to tell the ex-MI6 spy how he felt, although she didn't reject him, she told the navy seal, she told him she need time to think things over which put strain on there relationship. after a few weeks she finally agreed to go on a date with him. she did break up with the doctor and after dating for two years the navy seal finally proposed and the Ex-MI6 spy said yes and not long after they were married. then a few years later they had a daughter and the Navy seal was the happiest he had been in a long time. he loved his daughter more then anything in the world but his happiness would be short lived..."paused magnum as he was interrupted again. "Magnum!" yelled katsumoto as he ran over to Magnum, Higgins and Emma. "Gordy thank god your hear." cried Magnum. "How bad is it" questioned Katsumoto. "Its really bad." replied Magnum. "Magnum! Emma isn't breathing." cried Higgins.

Magnum checked for a pulse and in fact Emma wasn't breathing. he started doing chest compressions, desperate to get his little girl breathing again. "Emma please come back too" begged Magnum as he continued doing chest compressions. "Emma breathe, please baby breathe." cried Magnum as he checked her for a pulse. "She's breathing." sighed magnum in relief and that's when he saw TC landing his chopper. he carefully picked Emma up and carried her to the chopper, Higgins falling close behind.

this is the end of chapter 9. you guys we have 2 maybe 3 chapters left. the next chapter will be up soon