11. Concrete poem

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Day 11- (11th April)

Write a poem about your favourite thing. (Let it be a touchable object.
Don't give this thing too much thought. It can be your TV, ice-cream, a cake)
Write it in a Concrete poetry style.

( A concrete poem, or shape poem, is an arrangement of words on a page into shapes or patterns that reveal an image. )

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Ice cream— a delicious desert,
which I love to eat all time,
with a different flavour, it always captures my mind.


Why wouldn't it be?
as it's the most delicious thing.
butterscotch or caramel: it is,
always melt everyone's heart.


Be it in the summer or in the rain,
I always enjoy the creamy train,
as it's slowly flow down throughout my throat & an amazing sensation fill me up.


Every age of people love it always,
even when someone has a sore throat,
but her desire to lash it out,
never fails to extinguish at all.


But sometimes— I still wonder,
how some people do hate it so much?
it's the most delicious desert ever,
which manages to melt even a stone heart.


So everyone, say it aloud—
ice cream is the creamy flavour,
we all want it ever;
even in the scorching hot or even in the snowfall,
we will make cone of ice cream,
which will bring smile, even in the children world.

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Okay, it wasn't a concrete poem at all. ): And I am too lazy to rewrite, maybe later.

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Rewritten on — 1st October, 2022

Ice cream

A soft frozen food

Sweetened with milk flavor

I see flow of mountains, licking

Giggling, take a scoop of ice cream

Mind is taking whirlpool turns

For me, my heaven is melting

Different flavors are rolling

Butterscotch, strawberry

Sometimes vanilla

Can't resist

this.

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Does it look like ice cream now? .-.

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