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🦚POETRY RESULTS (2)🦚

Yay! Yay! Okay so I have no idea what to say.. So yeah um straight to the point lol

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1st Position 🥇

kayla435981 Poems

Judge's comment:

Cover/Title:   8 /10

The flow of words -  14/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  14/15
Writing style-  14/15

Poetic devices-  14/15

Emotions-   9/10

Originality-    10/10
Enjoyment-   10 /10
Total: 93/100

Reviews: Beautifully penned down gurl!
I am in love with your piece like so thoughtfully written. Like,  the transition from growing to that age 11 then,15, the graduate year, and 17 when you realised you are spending more time with your boyfriend, lol, and then you are 18. I mean, really nice and I appreciate your thoughts.
But, not everything is perfect right?, some poetic devices were missing, so if you add them, make them better. Also, you went abrupt in some portions, so take care next time.
Suggestion: A better cover maybe.
Overall good work, Keep it up!
Good luck in future!

2nd position🥈

_JeonK_  Cherishable

Judge's comment:

Cover/Title:  9 /10

The flow of words -  13/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  14.5/15
Writing style-  14 /15

Poetic devices-  14/15

Emotions-   9.5/10

Originality-    9/10
Enjoyment-   10 /10
Total: 92.5/100

Review: Beautifully Penned Down!!
Firstly, I would tell you, that you have a nice and attractive title to your collection, and cover as well.
Secondly, I really loved the emotions you added to your collection. I would say that you have added poetic devices like metaphors and similes, which is really good. Your writing style was good, but you know, a little more improvements are still needed in your flow of words, It is abrupt in some places like it’s not rhyming well. It had a lot of meanings in every line. Your flow of words was a little abrupt, as mentioned, sometimes in the middle and I look forward that you improve them.
Good Work, Keep Writing.
ALL THE VERY BEST FOR THE FUTURE!

3rd Position🥉

Witworthy Foreign eyes

Judge's comment:

Cover/Title:  10/10

The flow of words -  14/15

Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  14.5/15
Writing style-  13 /15

Poetic devices-  14/15

Emotions-   9/10

Originality-    8/10
Enjoyment-   9.5/10
Total: 92/100

Reviews: Overall a very nice piece, I loved the emotions in it. It had a lot of meanings in every line. Your flow of words was a little abrupt sometimes in the middle, you can just improve on that. The poem is rich in poetic devices such as rhetoric questions, imagery, repetition to mention but ,try to add a little more poetic devices in your poetry, it will make them better. Certain Issues here and there, but you will improve. Keep Writing. Beautifully Written!