CHOTU SHERNI

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2nd UPDATE OF TODAY. PLEASE HIT THE STAR BUTTON AND COMMENT YOUR VIEWS❣️.

I WILL CONTINUE FROM MY LAST UPDATE AS WELL.
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I AM LITERALLY PISSED OFF SEEING MANISH GOENKA. WHAT THE HELL IS HE UPTO?? HE SAYS HE IS AKSHU'S GUARDIAN BUT HE CAN'T UNDERSTAND HER PAIN HER LOVE?? WHY?? AT FIRST THE CONFUSION WAS BECAUSE OF SWARNA MIMI AND MANJIRI. SECONDLY THEY TOLD THAT THEY KNEW WHO ABHI WANT. AND THIRDLY NOW THEY ARE AFTER HIM FOR EVERYTHING. WHY??

UGH AND NOT A SINGLE PLOT IS UTILIZED PROPERLY. IT SEEMS LIKE MAKERS ARE JUST MOVING AHEAD WITH PLOTS. RATHER THAN REVEALING TRUTHS. EVERYONE SEES AKSHU'S FAULT EVERYTIME BUT NOT OF THAT AAROHI. WHY??
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MANISH - lejaiye inspector sahab isse

AKSHU (runs towards Abhi) - nahi inspector ismey Abhi ki galti nahi hain (she slips)

ABHI (jerks away Inspector hand) - Akshuuu (holds Akshu)

INSPECTOR - teri itni himmat ki tune on duty officer par haat uthaya

AKSHU - Nahi sir

INSPECTOR TAKES AWAY ABHI. AKSHU BURST OUT IN TEARS. KAIRAV CONSOLES HER.

MANISH (calmly) - Akshara chalo aandar

AKSHU (murmers) - Nahi nahi chalungi mein aandar mujhe Abhi k pas jana hain

MANISH (in little loud tone) - Akshara meine kaha aandar chalo

AKSHU (loudly) - Aur meine bhi kaha mein Abhi k pas jarahi hu (walks towards gate)

MANISH (angrily) - agar tumne iss ghar se bahar kadam rakha toh hamara tumse koi rista nahi hoga

AKSHU - mera aaplogo se rista kab tha

EVERYONE LOOKS AT HER.

AKSHU (looking at everyone) - Boliye na Mr.Goenka mera aap k sath rista kab tha.

KAIRAV - Akshu tu kya kehrahi hain yeh sab

AKSHU - Please bhaiya aaj mujhe bolne dijey

MANISH - Kehna kya chahti ho tum

AKSHU (taking a deep breath) - Mein aaplogo ki kuch lagti bhi hu kya Mr.Goenka. Mujhe toh nahi lagta ki mein aaplogo ki kuch lagti hu. Bachpan se leke aajtak meine dard aur dukh k alawa paya kya hain iss ghar mey. 10 saal 10 saal meine usse maa kaha jo meri maa thihi nahi. Meri maa ki jikar tak xoddiye unka naam tak nahi liya jata tha iss ghar mey kyu.

EVERYONE LOOKS AT EACH OTHER

AKSHU - Meri maa Naira k bare mey ekbar bhi kisine jikar kiya unn 10 saalo mey nahi kisine nahi. Jab mujhe pata chala ki meri maa Naira mumma thi tab bhi meine unhe aur Sirat mumma ko ek barabar pyaar kiya kabhi unhe soteli maa nahi samjha. Jab Aarohi ko yeh baat pata chali toh uski behaviour mey indifference aaye lekin aap sab ne kya kaha Akshu Aaru choti hain tum badi ho tum samajdar banjao. Sirf ek saal badi thi mein Aarohi se sirf ek saal (Akshu yelled at top of her voice)

Maa sirf Aarohi ne nahi meine bhi khoyi thi lekin sab ne mujhe paraya kardiya kyu kyuki mein so called badi thi. Kya ek saal bada hona itna bada paap hogaya tha. Aarohi bar bar mujhe maa ko leke ya kisi na kisi bahane nicha dikhati thi lekin tab bhi aaplogo ne usse kuch nahi kaha. Agar iski yeh jidd aur jalan ki koi jimmedar hain na toh woh aap sab ho. Yeh hamesa mujhse meri chize leti thi tab bhi aaplogo ne iska sath diya isse badawa diya kyu kyuki yeh choti thi huh mere bhi sapne thye meri bhi khwaise thi jo hamesa aaplog badi ho samajdar banjao ban k khuchal dete thye

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